这篇作文有错误吗?I have many hobbies,for example:Studies,the ice-skating,to watch the television,studies is I most likes.I like study have three reasons:First,the books lead me to enter a new world,this world does not have the space and time

这篇作文有错误吗?I have many hobbies,for example:Studies,the ice-skating,to watch the television,studies is I most likes.I like study have three reasons:First,the books lead me to enter a new world,this world does not have the space and time
这篇作文有错误吗?
I have many hobbies,for example:Studies,the ice-skating,to watch the television,studies is I most likes.I like study have three reasons:First,the books lead me to enter a new world,this world does not have the space and time limit colorfully.Through studying,I may trace occupy the generation of Egypt - - this human culture the cradle.The book can bring me to arrive US,that I have wanted to tour is full of the charm the place.Next,studies can unfold the new space in front of me,causes me to be perfect.zai guoqu di ji nian zhong,my majority knowledge are obtain through the books.Through reading,I have learned from them to many people in aspect and so on science,politics,life and society thought.Once more,studies between mine dream and the goal builds a factory bridge.To obtain successfully in future work profession,I must insist that will study,the thought and the practice.studies a part which already became me to live.Every day I spend some time to study read a newspaper,read the magazine.Evening,a book I has not been very difficult to go to sleep in the hand.

这篇作文有错误吗?I have many hobbies,for example:Studies,the ice-skating,to watch the television,studies is I most likes.I like study have three reasons:First,the books lead me to enter a new world,this world does not have the space and time
第一句studies 应该是 studying 吧.watch 应该是 watching 吧.
第二句studies is my most like.是 studying is my favourite.
第三句 I like study studying .或者to study
sorry.后面的看不懂.没学过

前面没错 Evening, a book I has not been very difficult to go to sleep in the hand.这一句不够通顺。晚上，我并没有很困难的书去在手上睡觉？

说实话，有很多错误。