纠正一下这篇英语文章中的错误I want to do something for the Expo“Better city,better life” this slogan shows everyone that the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be held successful.If I can have great honor of showing everyone Shangh
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纠正一下这篇英语文章中的错误I want to do something for the Expo“Better city,better life” this slogan shows everyone that the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be held successful.If I can have great honor of showing everyone Shangh
纠正一下这篇英语文章中的错误
I want to do something for the Expo
“Better city,better life” this slogan shows everyone that the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be held successful.If I can have great honor of showing everyone Shanghai’s big changes,l will make a magazine for the Shanghai Would Expo.This magazine will include Shanghai’s culture,local snakes and some wonderful places everybody should visit like the oriental pearl TV tower,Jinmao Building and so on.I will also brief readers on some knowledge about Would Expo.I sure people will be amazed by Shanghai’s modern technology and a long history of the Expo.
I want to do something foe the Expo although l am just an everyman.I hope Shanghai will be more and more strong in the future.
纠正一下这篇英语文章中的错误I want to do something for the Expo“Better city,better life” this slogan shows everyone that the World Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be held successful.If I can have great honor of showing everyone Shangh
1.successful改成successfully,副词形式修饰动词hold.
2.I sure 改成I am sure
3.I want to do something foe the Expo although l am just an everyman.中的I want to 可以换成I intend to 这样就不会和前面重复了.
总的来说写得还是不错的,用到了一些固定词组如have the honor of ,and so on,be amazed by ,more and more ,in the future 等等.还有些句型如宾语从句、虚拟语气、定语从句等.不过要注意细节,词形的变化哦!细节决定成败.还有你说If I can have great honor of showing everyone Shanghai’s big changes,l will make a magazine for the Shanghai Would Expo.所以杂志的内容应该更大部分是上海的变化.