帮我看看这篇作文有没有离题!主题为“学好英语,迎大运”如果有,请说说怎样修改!Meet the Universiade and learn English wellHello everyone!I am glad to be here to share my views with you!I am from Class 3,Grade 6,Cuibei Pr
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帮我看看这篇作文有没有离题!主题为“学好英语,迎大运”如果有,请说说怎样修改!Meet the Universiade and learn English wellHello everyone!I am glad to be here to share my views with you!I am from Class 3,Grade 6,Cuibei Pr
帮我看看这篇作文有没有离题!主题为“学好英语,迎大运”如果有,请说说怎样修改!
Meet the Universiade and learn English well
Hello everyone!I am glad to be here to share my views with you!I am from Class 3,Grade 6,Cuibei Primary School.I have a lot of hobbies and my mark was always excellently.I think learn English well can be little volunteers.So if a foreign tourist ask me some questions,I can easily help him .It also can let the foreigners think our Chinese are friendly and warm.
The 26th Summer Universiade will be held in August in 2011.We should learn some knowledge about it.The stadium is in Longgang District.The mascot of the Universiade is “UU”.“UU” has a smile on her face.She is happy and colorful.“Happy U” is the emblem of the Shenzhen Summer Universiade.Everyone is excited about the Universiade.
As a Shenzhen citizen,we should protect the environment [in'vaiərənmənt] and be polite to others.We shouldn’t disrespect ['disris'pekt] our elders and we shouldn’t fight.Also remember that this civilization [,sivilai'zeiʃən] terminology[,tɜ:mə'nɔlədʒi:]:"please" "hello" "thank you" "sorry" and"good-bye” and so on.
Let us learn English well and meet the Shenzhen Summer Universiade!
帮我看看这篇作文有没有离题!主题为“学好英语,迎大运”如果有,请说说怎样修改!Meet the Universiade and learn English wellHello everyone!I am glad to be here to share my views with you!I am from Class 3,Grade 6,Cuibei Pr
感觉模模糊糊的--好像点题点的不太够.我想可以多在文章中强调几次学英语的好处之类,最好写成规范的议论文比较好哈!