检查一下我的英语作文Whyte's vacatiom plans Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend that name is whyte.The vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is great too.He told me about X

检查一下我的英语作文Whyte's vacatiom plans Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend that name is whyte.The vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is great too.He told me about X
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Whyte's vacatiom plans
Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend that name is whyte.The vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is great too.He told me about Xia Meng's sea and he's going to swimming in the sea and eating someting delicious.He also thinks XiaMeng's people is friendly.He'll have a relaxing vacation.

检查一下我的英语作文Whyte's vacatiom plans Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend that name is whyte.The vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is great too.He told me about X
Whyte's vacatioN plans
Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend WHOSEname is Whyte.ThIS vacation,he's going to XiaMen.And he's GONGING TO stay there for a week.He thinks there WILL BE beautiful,the weather WILL BE great too.He WILL BE TELL me about Xia Meng's sea AFTER HE COME BACK.And he's going to swim in the sea and eat sometHing delicious.He'll have a relaxing vacation.
既然是plans就不应该有过去式,he thinks XiaMeng's people is friendly.也应该再回来以后再说嘛
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Whyte is one of my friends, Vacation is coming and here are his plans. He's going to Xiamen for vocation and plan to stay there for a week. He thinks Xiamen is really beautiful and the weather there i...

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Whyte is one of my friends, Vacation is coming and here are his plans. He's going to Xiamen for vocation and plan to stay there for a week. He thinks Xiamen is really beautiful and the weather there is great. He tells me about Xiamen's sea and he's going to swim in the sea and eat something delicious. He also thinks Xiamen's people are friendly. He'll have a realxing vacation.

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Whyte's vacatiom plans
Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend WHICH NAMED Whyte.ThTS vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is WON...

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Whyte's vacatiom plans
Hello,I'm Xiao Ming.I have a friend WHICH NAMED Whyte.ThTS vacation,he's going to XiaMeng.And he's staying there for a week.He thinks there is beautiful,the weather is WONDERFUL,too.HeTELLS me about Xia Meng's sea and he's going to swimming in the sea and eating someting delicious.He HOPES XiaMeng's people is friendly.He'll have a relaxing vacation.I AM WISH HIM TO HAVE FUN .
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