我想知道这些错的地方,为什么要这样改l like music very much,pop songs in particular.Every evening (then改成when) I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加入am) at home.I always play some of my favorite songs (on改成with) my
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我想知道这些错的地方,为什么要这样改l like music very much,pop songs in particular.Every evening (then改成when) I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加入am) at home.I always play some of my favorite songs (on改成with) my
我想知道这些错的地方,为什么要这样改
l like music very much,pop songs in particular.Every evening (then改成when) I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加入am) at home.I always play some of my favorite songs (on改成with) my tape recorder.The familiar pattern of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music.Now and then I (stopped改成stop) to follow the songs.Sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to focus my attention (to改成on) my homework.She does not like (去掉the) pop music,like most grown-ups,she enjoys folk songs,because the (peace改成peaceful) music reminds her of (their改成her) beautiful life when she was young.It is certain (which改成that) people of different (age改成ages) understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music
我想知道这些错的地方,为什么要这样改l like music very much,pop songs in particular.Every evening (then改成when) I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加入am) at home.I always play some of my favorite songs (on改成with) my
这些大概可分为3类：词,短语搭配,固定用法（英语中的约定俗成,如同成语,谚语）和语法
1 WHEN 是时间状语从句引导词,而THEN没有此功能,THEN词意中也有那时候的意思,而WHEN本身没有,只有当翻译时为了顺应中文习惯,可以翻译成“那时”
2 I AT HOME 是明显的中式英语,即我在家,英文中主谓不可缺,因此I后面必须加上AM（BE动词做谓语）
3 PLAY WITH 与 PLAY ON的区别,在于ON一般是与操纵性的机器联系,比如PLAY GAMES ON MY COMPUTER,但WITH则较轻,可以与人也可以与简单的器械联系.
4 全篇为一般现在时,那这里STOPPED为什么会突然出现,如果想用过去时,需要有表征过去时态的状语出现,比如 5 DAYS AGO ,I STOPPED TO.
5 这里是 FOCUS ON 的搭配,关注的意思而且ON 一般有专注到某件事情上的意思,PAY ATTENTION TO则是注意的意思,两者有区别.
6 POP MUSIC,这是英语中的惯有名词,不用THE定冠词修饰,属于固定用法.
7 PEACE 为名词,MUSIC也为名词,要修饰名词,需要使用形容词做定语,所以用PEACEFUL
8 本句属于句意混乱,主语是SHE,那么意思应该是让她想起了她小时候那么美好的生活（记忆）
9 IT IS ...THAT属于固定用法.
10 AGE在这里表示年龄段,前面又有形容词修饰,需用复数