我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂My schoolMy schoo
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我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂My schoolMy schoo
我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,
看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.
我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊
千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂
My school
My school was very terrible.turning on the light is not allowed in the daytime.Some students wan to turn on the light.because the eyes of them was not good and （看不清黑板）.（如果我们把打开了 被学校发现就会罚款）
The WC of school was very very terrible.No water and nobody clean.Eery time I went there want to vomit.
Many teachers of school was not duty to us.So many students’ grades was very terrible amd they always got a D this term.
我英语老师部管我们,我好跑到这里来了.这是我今天上课发牢骚写的.内容是真实的哦
括号里面的句子是我不会写的
我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,看下哪些句子有语法错误,哪些句子写的不好,写的部好麻烦帮我改下.我英语成绩非常烂,麻烦修改详细点啊千万不要像语法书上那样讲我看不懂My schoolMy schoo
the eyes of them改成their eyesigt他们的视力（eyes是复数,was是单数.搭配错误）
very very可改成so
nobody clean改成nobody to clean
every time改成each time（这是正常搭配）
Many teachers of school was not duty to us中was改成were（主语是老师们,谓语应该用复数)
duty to us改成on duty值日、在职
So many students’ grades was 改成many students' grades are all terrible
看不清黑板：they cannot watch the blackboard closely
如果我们开灯被学校发现就会罚款：if we turned on lights,we will be fined by our school
我好不容易打好的,希望同学可以认真看一下.其实英语学习还在于自己,加油!