谁帮我检查下我的作文语法有没有错各位见笑了...our city shanghai is east of china.shanghai is the most famous city in china.there are 110 millions people in shanghai.they just speak chinese.they good at play football.HUANGPU RIVER
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谁帮我检查下我的作文语法有没有错各位见笑了...our city shanghai is east of china.shanghai is the most famous city in china.there are 110 millions people in shanghai.they just speak chinese.they good at play football.HUANGPU RIVER
谁帮我检查下我的作文语法有没有错
各位见笑了...
our city shanghai is east of china.shanghai is the most famous city in china.there are 110 millions people in shanghai.they just speak chinese.they good at play football.HUANGPU RIVER is the longest river in shanghai.in shanghai,there are many tall buildings and big shop in shanghai.shanghai has 100 millious years old.I LOVE shanghai very much．顺便无耻下,谁能告诉我”有梦,有爱,有朋友的地方就是家,心的故乡”的英语
谁帮我检查下我的作文语法有没有错各位见笑了...our city shanghai is east of china.shanghai is the most famous city in china.there are 110 millions people in shanghai.they just speak chinese.they good at play football.HUANGPU RIVER
第一句改为our city shanghai is in east of china 加一个in
they （are）good at play football 加个are 固定词组 be good at
in shanghai,there are many tall buildings and big shop in shanghai 这句头尾有两个in shanghai 重复 删除一个