帮我看一下英语作文有没有错误吧!作文正文：How to protect the animals Right now,animals are dying quicker and quicker.Animals are friends .We should protect them.But how to protect animals?There are some advice.1.Don't kill them.And

帮我看一下英语作文有没有错误吧!作文正文：How to protect the animals Right now,animals are dying quicker and quicker.Animals are friends .We should protect them.But how to protect animals?There are some advice.1.Don't kill them.And
帮我看一下英语作文有没有错误吧!
作文正文：How to protect the animals Right now,animals are dying quicker and quicker.Animals are friends .We should protect them.But how to protect animals?There are some advice.1.Don't kill them.And don't eat wild animals especially endangered animals such as wild chickens,wild fish and even wild crocodiles.2.Don't cut casually!It's important.It's not only for our enviroment,but also for their habitat.The forest are fading away,the birds have no place to live,they just can only wait for death.And more animals too!There are many ways to protect animals.But do what I say,that's the main thing!

帮我看一下英语作文有没有错误吧!作文正文：How to protect the animals Right now,animals are dying quicker and quicker.Animals are friends .We should protect them.But how to protect animals?There are some advice.1.Don't kill them.And
Right now,animals are dying *faster and faster* (at a quicker rate than ever before).We should protect them.But how *do we* protect animals?*Here* are some advice.*First*,don't kill them,and don't eat wild animals,especially *the* endangered animals such as wild *chicken*,wild fish,and wild crocodiles.*Second*,*it is important to not cut down the forests* casually.It's not only for our environment but also for their *habitats* The forests are fading away,*and* the birds have no place ot live; *they can only wait for death*.*More animals will also die.* There are many ways to protect animals,*but the main thing is to protect them and the places they live.*

And more animals too 少了逗号，而且这句话是有错的，应该改成这样
the birds have no place to live,they just can only wait for death，and more animals are so （so指代前面的句子），too!
作文建议多用从句什么的，例如
Don't cut casually ， w...

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And more animals too 少了逗号，而且这句话是有错的，应该改成这样
the birds have no place to live,they just can only wait for death，and more animals are so （so指代前面的句子），too!
作文建议多用从句什么的，例如
Don't cut casually ， which Is important
dying是现在分词；die是没有现在进行时的 这里最好用are killed
Animals are our friends

We should protect them from killing .But how to protect animals（重复）
应该 to protect animals ，here are 。。。。。
1 2 3 这些词最好用first second 。。。。


Don't cut （them） casually! 中国是英语，没有谓语

It's not only for our enviroment,but also for their habitat. 感觉逻辑有点颠倒
不仅仅是为了动物的栖息地，而且是为了我们的环境

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