帮我修改下这篇英文回信,I will appreciate your good patience for improving my written and conversational English.It is delighted to learn that you will come back soon and I am happy to join in any of English corners hosted by you and your f

帮我修改下这篇英文回信,I will appreciate your good patience for improving my written and conversational English.It is delighted to learn that you will come back soon and I am happy to join in any of English corners hosted by you and your f
帮我修改下这篇英文回信,
I will appreciate your good patience for improving my written and conversational English.
It is delighted to learn that you will come back soon and I am happy to join in any of English corners hosted by you and your friends,however,I have no idea what kind of training sessions you will deliver in future on our campus,would you mind telling me what it is about?
In last letter you mentionde the tea house,I am sorry to inform you that there is scarcely tea house near Inner Mongolia University,however,numerous are the restaurants which serve Mnogolian milk tea and other traditional Mongolian food.
You know what,I always spend several times to correct the erros in my letter before it is sent to you.I think it is still hard for me to speak English in front of you,but I would make the effort to practice my oral English before we meet again.I have downloaded Skype,and I will figure out how to use it as soon as possible.

帮我修改下这篇英文回信,I will appreciate your good patience for improving my written and conversational English.It is delighted to learn that you will come back soon and I am happy to join in any of English corners hosted by you and your f
I will(would like to~更加礼貌） appreciate your good patience for improving my written and conversational(oral/spoken) English.
It is(I am) delighted to learn that you will come back soon and I am happy to join in（participate） any of English corners hosted by you and your friends.However,I have no idea （about )what kind of training sessions you will deliver in future on(in) our campus.Would you mind telling me what it is(they are) about?
In the last letter,you mentioned the tea house.I am sorry to inform you that there is scarcely (any) tea house near Inner Mongolia University,however(but) numerous are the restaurants which serve Mnogolian milk tea and other traditional Mongolian food.
You know what(do you know that...),I always corrected the erros(mistakes/errors) in my letter for several times before it was sent to you.I think it is still hard for me to speak English in front of you,but I would make efforts to practice my oral English before we meet again.I have downloaded Skype,and I will figure out how to use it as soon as possible.
你已经写得很好了.写给你外国朋友吧,别用太难的句型了.随意就好,不是写给教授什么的~