一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular s

一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular s
一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.
Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular songs happy except me.Because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well,so I dared not have a try.Encouraging by my friends,I picked up the microphone and sing an English song---"Yesterday Once More".Now I have become cheerfully and above all I've overcome my shynesses.I believe that the chief enemy in one's life is oneself.We shouldn't lose our heart just because of one or two failures
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一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular s
Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good (friends) for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well (in )the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular songs (happily) except me.Because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well,so I dared not have a try.(Encouraged) by my friends,I picked up the microphone and( sang) an English song---"Yesterday Once More".Now I have become (cheerful) and above all I've (overcomed) my shynesses.I believe that the chief enemy in one's life is oneself.We shouldn't lose our heart just because of one or two failures.

Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the (friend -> friends)
first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't (in bad -> in a bad)
do well the Englis...

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Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the (friend -> friends)
first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't (in bad -> in a bad)
do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular songs (well the -> well in the)
happy except me.Because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well,so I (happy -> happily)
dared not have a try.Encouraging by my friends,I picked up the (Encouraging -> Encouraged)
microphone and sing an English song---"Yesterday Once More".Now I (sing -> sang)
have become cheerfully and above all I've overcome my shynesses.I (cheerfully -> cheerful)
believe that the chief enemy in one's life is oneself.We shouldn't (oneself -> one himself/herself)
lose our heart just because of one or two failures (heart -> faith)

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friends do well in happily cheerful

第一行的of my good friend 改为of my good friends