求英语大神帮个忙.分值可追加,80词左右..以 A HappyTrip 为题,写一篇关于旅行或外出游玩的记叙性短文,内容可围绕旅行中的所见所闻、趣事,及旅行结束后的感受展开.字数在80－100之间.

求英语大神帮个忙.分值可追加,80词左右..以 A HappyTrip 为题,写一篇关于旅行或外出游玩的记叙性短文,内容可围绕旅行中的所见所闻、趣事,及旅行结束后的感受展开.字数在80－100之间.
求英语大神帮个忙.分值可追加,80词左右..
以 A HappyTrip 为题,写一篇关于旅行或外出游玩的记叙性短文,内容可围绕旅行中的所见所闻、趣事,及旅行结束后的感受展开.字数在80－100之间.

求英语大神帮个忙.分值可追加,80词左右..以 A HappyTrip 为题,写一篇关于旅行或外出游玩的记叙性短文,内容可围绕旅行中的所见所闻、趣事,及旅行结束后的感受展开.字数在80－100之间.
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　　Last winter holiday,my parents and I had an opportunit­y to visit our beautiful capital—Beijing,I was very excited because this is my first time to go on a trip by plane.
In this five-day-trip,we have to visit some famous places in Beijing:such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and so on.Though there were so many good places we can visit,but the there was a big wind in Beijing,too.So we have to covered ourselves with a lot of clothes(It looks like a snowman.)to keep out the cold wind,it was really difficult to stand the clothes!

   But luckily,we can get a good view of the Beijing City and we also had fun visiting the places we had to visit.In a word,we had a great time during the trip this time.
A visit to Beijing let me know more about other places in our country and also makes me know more konwledge about the outside world,that was useful all my life.

   In a word,I love this trip,it was helpful and unfrogetab­le for me,it was fun!


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　　I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn't move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water,and ate some food.After a while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.

During the Spring Festival holidays, I had travelled to Hong Kong with some of my friends. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but it is a crowded and prosperous. In Hong Kong, all...

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During the Spring Festival holidays, I had travelled to Hong Kong with some of my friends. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but it is a crowded and prosperous. In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs. We went to lots of places, such as the Disneyland and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. Sitting in the cable car, you can see Deep Water Bay, it is a beautiful sea view. But my friend Lily was afraid of sitting in the cable car! We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didn't like the food. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.
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during the spring festival holidays, i had travelled to hong kong with some of my friends. we went to hong kong by plane. hong kong is very small, but it is a crowded and prosperous. in hong kong, all of the buildings are very tall. there are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. in hong kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs. we went to lots of places, such as the disneyland and ocean park. i like ocean park best. sitting in the cable car, you can see deep water bay, it is abeautiful sea view. but my friend lily was afraid of sitting in the cable car! we stayed in the shu ren college. there are many big trees around it. we had meals in the restaurants, but i didn’t like the food. i like hong kong and i hope to go there

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