英语好的同学来 帮我检查下有无语法错误The Day She Went Into My LifeEverything Is Changed...When She Dressed In PurpleEverything Lose Is Color...She Loved SnowShe Was Used To Hit MeBy A Snowball…When I Ran To Catch HerShe Ran Away W

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英语好的同学来帮我检查下有无语法错误TheDaySheWentIntoMyLifeEverythingIsChanged...WhenSheDressedInPurpleEverythingLoseI

英语好的同学来 帮我检查下有无语法错误The Day She Went Into My LifeEverything Is Changed...When She Dressed In PurpleEverything Lose Is Color...She Loved SnowShe Was Used To Hit MeBy A Snowball…When I Ran To Catch HerShe Ran Away W
英语好的同学来 帮我检查下有无语法错误
The Day She Went Into My Life
Everything Is Changed...
When She Dressed In Purple
Everything Lose Is Color...
She Loved Snow
She Was Used To Hit Me
By A Snowball…
When I Ran To Catch Her
She Ran Away With Laugh…
As The Time Going By
When I Really Realize What Is Love
She Had Gone Away...
没什么文采..请英语好的同学帮检查下有无错误?有的话请指正
第四行 Everything Lose 【Its】 Color...
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英语好的同学来 帮我检查下有无语法错误The Day She Went Into My LifeEverything Is Changed...When She Dressed In PurpleEverything Lose Is Color...She Loved SnowShe Was Used To Hit MeBy A Snowball…When I Ran To Catch HerShe Ran Away W
The Day She Went Into My Life
Everything was Changed...
When She Dressed In Purple
Everything Lost Its Color...
She Loved Snow
She Used To Hit Me
By A Snowball…
When I Ran To Catch Her
She Ran Away With Laugh…
As The Time Going By
When I Really Realized What is Love
She Had Gone Away...

The Day She Went Into My Life
Everything Was Changed...
When She Was In Purple
Everything Lost Its Color...
She Loved Snow
She Was Used To Hitting Me
By A Snowball…
...

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The Day She Went Into My Life
Everything Was Changed...
When She Was In Purple
Everything Lost Its Color...
She Loved Snow
She Was Used To Hitting Me
By A Snowball…
When I Ran To Catch Her
She Ran Away With Laugh…
As The Time Goes On
When I Really Know What Love Is
She Has Gone Away...
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