这篇英语短文有没有语法错误?My dream jobWhen I grow up,my parents hope me can be a lawyer ,but I prefer to be a director rather than be a lawyer.I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director.If I want to be a lawyer,I should lear

这篇英语短文有没有语法错误?My dream jobWhen I grow up,my parents hope me can be a lawyer ,but I prefer to be a director rather than be a lawyer.I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director.If I want to be a lawyer,I should lear
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My dream job
When I grow up,my parents hope me can be a lawyer ,but I prefer to be a director rather than be a lawyer.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director.If I want to be a lawyer,I should learn law in the university.When I finish learing.I’m going to go to the U.S.A.and find a part-time job fot a year.I’m going to practice my English spoken language at the same time.Then I’m going to find a job in a lawyer office.And learn how to be a wonderful lawyer.
How to be a director is a problem.First,I think a director should have good human relations.If I want to be a director,I should communicate well with everybody in my team.And I must be a creative person.
I’m not sure which job is the best fot me yet,but I will never give up my dreams.

这篇英语短文有没有语法错误?My dream jobWhen I grow up,my parents hope me can be a lawyer ,but I prefer to be a director rather than be a lawyer.I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director.If I want to be a lawyer,I should lear
My dream job
When I grow up,my parents hope I can be a lawyer ,but I prefer to be a director rather than be a lawyer.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director.If I want to be a lawyer,I should learn law in university.When I finish learning.I’m going to the U.S.A.and to find a part-time job fot a year.I’m going to practice my spoken English at the same time.Then I’m going to find a job in a lawyer office,and learn how to be a wonderful lawyer.
How to be a director is a problem.First,I think a director should have good human relations.If I want to be a director,I should communicate well with everybody in my team.And I must be a creative person.
I’m not sure which job is the best for me yet,but I will never give up my dreams.
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My dream job
As I grow up, my parents hope me to be a lawyer. But I prefer to be a director rather than to be a lawyer.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director. If I want to be ...

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My dream job
As I grow up, my parents hope me to be a lawyer. But I prefer to be a director rather than to be a lawyer.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than to be a director. If I want to be a lawyer, I should learn law in university. When I finish learning. I will go to the U.S.A. and find a part-time job for one year. I will practice my spoken English at the same time. Then I will find a job in a lawyer office and try to learn how to be a wonderful lawyer.
How to be a director is a problem. First, I think a director should have good human relationships. If I want to be a director, I should communicate well with everybody in my team. And I must be a creative person.
I’m not sure which job is better for me right now, but I will never give up my dreams.

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hpoe that I can be :rather than to be; I think being a lawyer ,than being a doctor
spoken English ,have good relationship with ohers,yet 去掉

My parents hope that when I grow up I can be a lawyer, but I prefer to be a director.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than being a director. if I want to be a lawyer, I should study law when I en...

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My parents hope that when I grow up I can be a lawyer, but I prefer to be a director.
I think to be a lawyer is easier than being a director. if I want to be a lawyer, I should study law when I enter university. When I finished my studies, I will go to the United States and find a part-time job for a year.I can practice my english at the same time. Then I'll find a job in an attorney office, and learn how to be a wonderful lawyer.

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My Dream Job
Everybody has his dream. But mine is different from theirs!
I have my dream. I think it's a happy job.
I want to be a reporter. If I become a reporter, I will
write ma...

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My Dream Job
Everybody has his dream. But mine is different from theirs!
I have my dream. I think it's a happy job.
I want to be a reporter. If I become a reporter, I will
write many articles for a TV station . It will
be much happy! So how I can do for it ? First of all, I will
finish my study. Then I will go to the university to study
hard. I want to work for a TV station. It must be more
interesting then working in a newspaper or a magazine !
I will hard-working, because I belive my dream will come true!

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