自己写了一首英文诗,纯新手,为了交英语作业写的,不过既然写了,还是希望写好一点.She is coming,little maidenWith the pleasant sunshine ladenWith my heart pounding suddenWith all other things hiddenShe is smiling,extreme g
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自己写了一首英文诗,纯新手,为了交英语作业写的,不过既然写了,还是希望写好一点.She is coming,little maidenWith the pleasant sunshine ladenWith my heart pounding suddenWith all other things hiddenShe is smiling,extreme g
自己写了一首英文诗,纯新手,为了交英语作业写的,不过既然写了,还是希望写好一点.
She is coming,little maiden
With the pleasant sunshine laden
With my heart pounding sudden
With all other things hidden
She is smiling,extreme grace
May be the song that summer sings
May be the chill that autumn brings
May be the snow that winter fallings
She is everything,gentle lady
Attracting like princess at a party
Fascinating like star taking a fancy
Dreaming like Venus standing for beauty
She is fading...
请教一下有没有不恰当的需要修改的地方,
另外能弱弱的求个中文翻译吗..
自己写了一首英文诗,纯新手,为了交英语作业写的,不过既然写了,还是希望写好一点.She is coming,little maidenWith the pleasant sunshine ladenWith my heart pounding suddenWith all other things hiddenShe is smiling,extreme g
写得很好,很用心!
要修改的:May be the snow that winter =winter's pouring 浇灌.