一篇英语短文,求挑错A story about XiangLong long ago,he made a movie about thief catch policeman.He acted the thief The movie was a great success!And he was famous .He is Xiang .Xiang is a great man He is tall and strong.One day he eats dinne

一篇英语短文,求挑错A story about XiangLong long ago,he made a movie about thief catch policeman.He acted the thief The movie was a great success!And he was famous .He is Xiang .Xiang is a great man He is tall and strong.One day he eats dinne
一篇英语短文,求挑错
A story about Xiang
Long long ago,he made a movie about thief catch policeman.He acted the thief The movie was a great success!And he was famous .He is Xiang .Xiang is a great man He is tall and strong.One day he eats dinner then he goes out far a walk At the First Avenue,he looks a small boy is fighting with a dog.And the dog looks very poor .Because the boy is very strong but Xiang is stronger than the boy .And Xiang is very angry .So he decide to help the poor dog Xiang run away.The small boy give him a hand.Xiang isn't feeling well.He can't give the small boy a hand .The small boy run away Xiang think he have a sick He bring the dog to his home.
纯是小孩无聊之作,为了不形成错误语感,求指错.
中文意思：关于祥的故事
很久很久以前,他出演了一部关于小偷抓警察的电影.他扮演了里面的小偷一角.这部电影取得了巨大的成功.他也出名了.他就是祥.祥是个很棒的男人,他长得又高又壮.一天,祥吃过晚饭出去散步.在第一大道上看到一个小男孩在和一只小狗打架.这只小狗看起来非常可怜,因为小男孩很强壮,但是,祥比小男孩更强壮.祥很生气.所以决定帮助小狗.祥向男孩跑去,男孩给了他一拳.祥感觉很不舒服,他不能还手了.小男孩跑开了,祥觉得自己好像生了病,他把小狗带回了家.
时态,语法,一些词组有什么错?最好能扩写详细一点.

一篇英语短文,求挑错A story about XiangLong long ago,he made a movie about thief catch policeman.He acted the thief The movie was a great success!And he was famous .He is Xiang .Xiang is a great man He is tall and strong.One day he eats dinne
A long time ago, he starred in the movie about the thief caught police movies. He played the inside of the thief iceberg. The film has been a huge success. He also very famous. He is auspicious. Cheung is a great man, he is tall and strong. One day, cheung after supper we go out for a walk. In the first big road saw a little boy with a dog fight. The puppy looks very pitiful, because the little boy is very strong, but, cheung than the little boy stronger. Cheung was very angry. So I decided to help the puppy. Cheung toward the boy ran, boy gave his fist. Cheung feel very uncomfortable, he could not fight back. The little boy ran away, cheung feel like sick, he put the puppy home.
很久以前,他演了一部电影对小偷抓住警察.他扮演这个贼电影很成功!他很有名.他是湘.Xiang是一个伟人他又高又壮.有一天,他吃晚餐远他接着在第一个大街走,他看起来一个小男孩正在带着一只狗.狗看起来很差,因为这个男孩很强劲,但湘比男孩,湘很生气,所以他决定帮助穷人的狗湘跑开了.那个小男孩助他一臂之力.湘不舒服.他不给小男孩手.小男孩跑开了湘认为他有一个生病的他带狗去他家.
这个是对的啊

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