简单改下语法吧!　Interference of light is divided into two, one is the Wavefront to interfere, the other is amplitude interference.Wavefront interferometric method is set up in the spot light wave field formed by opaque screens, open on two o

简单改下语法吧!　Interference of light is divided into two, one is the Wavefront to interfere, the other is amplitude interference.Wavefront interferometric method is set up in the spot light wave field formed by opaque screens, open on two o
简单改下语法吧!
　Interference of light is divided into two, one is the Wavefront to interfere, the other is amplitude interference.Wavefront interferometric method is set up in the spot light wave field formed by opaque screens, open on two or more tiny holes or seams, so that the same wave train after different holes, seams, diffraction, diffusion, which overlap in some areas after the screen formed by interference.Because of the opaque screen does not often require that happens to be the little square of light waves, but can be a wavefront of light, holes and seams on space partition of the Wavefront, and therefore such devices commonly known as Wavefront device.This papers on various points wave surface double light interference for deep analysis, knows has by points wave surface obtained coherent light and achieved interference most famous of examples has Yang experiment, Yang experiment is divided into Yang double hole experiment and Yang double sewing experiment, also has Fresnel double mirror, Fresnel double mirror and is divided into Fresnel duplex mirror and Fresnel double Prism, also has Lloyd mirror, and than tired on cut lens, and Meslin’s, experiment.And conduct in-depth research on these experiments, analyze their experimental device, get dual optical methods.

简单改下语法吧!　Interference of light is divided into two, one is the Wavefront to interfere, the other is amplitude interference.Wavefront interferometric method is set up in the spot light wave field formed by opaque screens, open on two o
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one is the Wavefrontto interfere 是 the other isamplitude interference 并列关系,需要用 and 连接.




open on twoor more tiny holes or seams 改为分词短语 opening on two or more tiny holes or seams 充当前面主句的伴随状语.




(so that) thesame wave train after different holes,…,which overlap in some areas after thescreen formed by interference  

　　由于标点符号的原因,本句存在两种理解法——
　　1）the same wavetrain after different holes（不同空穴…等后面的相同波列）是主句,which部分是定语从句；显而易见,主句是个没有谓语动词不完整句
　　2）the same wavetrain after different holes … formed by interference（不同空穴…等后面的相同波列通过干扰形成）是主句,which overlap in some areas after the screen 是定语从句,可见主句的谓语动词应该是 is formed.



4、Because ofthe opaque screen does not often require that happens to be the little squareof light waves,but can be a … 一句中 Because of the opaque screen 是介词短语,不能充当主语,删除of,用 because 直接做连词,




5、and thereforesuch devices commonly known as Wavefront device 中删除and therefore 变成 because 从句的主句.




6、this papers on是否要说“这一点掩盖了…,如确,应改为 thus papers over




7、最后一段搞不清要表达什么意思,只把部分层次较乱的地方进行了调整,其他部分请考虑自行修改或给出汉语意思帮你修改.

 
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　　Interference of light is divided into two,one is the Wavefront tointerfere,(and) the other is amplitude interference.Wavefront interferometricmethod is set up in the spot light wave field formed by opaque screens,(opening)on two or more tiny holes or seams,so that the same wave train after differentholes,seams,diffraction,diffusion,which overlap in some areas after thescreen(,is) formed by interference.(Because) the opaque screen does not oftenrequire that (it) happens to be the little square of light waves,but can be awavefront of light,holes and seams on space partition of the Wavefront,(删除and therefore) such devicescommonly known as Wavefront device.


　　This papers (over) [various points wave surface double lightinterference for deep analysis,knows has by points wave surface obtainedcoherent light and achieved interference] ——此处需要修改


　　Most famous examples (are) Yang experiment,(Fresnel double mirror,Lloydmirror and Meslin’s,experiment).Yang experiment is divided into Yang doublehole experiment and Yang double sewing experiment; Fresnel double mirror isdivided into Fresnel duplex mirror and Fresnel double Prism,


　　and than tired on cut lens,.And conduct in-depth research on theseexperiments,analyze their experimental device,get dual optical methods.——此处也不知所云,建议修改.