请帮忙改下英语作文 口头发言The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes. Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is tha

请帮忙改下英语作文 口头发言The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes. Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is tha
请帮忙改下英语作文 口头发言
The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes.
Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is that?What is the secret of success?
This sentence gives us an answer--be ready for the opportunity and catch it.
First,be ready for the opportunity means that you should know about your aim abviously.A man with no aim just like a ship with no destenation.You know about what you want to do,and go ahead.
Second,attitude is also a key to success.If you suppose that success only depands on the intellectual mind and do not work hard ai all,you are completely wrong.
Third,ability is important,too.But don't care whether you have it now.This can be established byyour work.We will gain a lot of experience as we grow up.
No one wasbornwith an great opportunity,but you can create it by yourself.Opportunitys only find those people who has been ready to face it.
And are you ready for success?
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请帮忙改下英语作文 口头发言The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes. Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is tha
从上到下修改：
去掉for a man、his
opportunity改复数
everyone's
succed 拼错了
去 is that
First,be这里的be应为being,first 应为Firstly(或The first）
abviously?应为clearly
aims
You should know
同样,secondly
suppose换成think（“高级”词汇并不一定能表达准确,而且不适合用来演讲）
on intelligence,后面mind不要
Thirdly
have it now or not（whether用法）
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