请英语爱好者看看这封信有错吗?Hi,honey,I have receied your letter on March 5,2007.From the letter,I have got a lot of information about your life in Australia.I'm very happy to know that you have absolutely adapted.I don't know whether y

请英语爱好者看看这封信有错吗?Hi,honey,I have receied your letter on March 5,2007.From the letter,I have got a lot of information about your life in Australia.I'm very happy to know that you have absolutely adapted.I don't know whether y
请英语爱好者看看这封信有错吗?
Hi,honey,
I have receied your letter on March 5,2007.From the letter,I have got a lot of information about your life in Australia.I'm very happy to know that you have absolutely adapted.I don't know whether you are receive a letter in reply from me.
I bought this postcard at post office yesterday and I think the picture on the postcard is very beautiful and meaningful.Dancer on the picture is all deaf-mute.The dance they performed was called thousand-handed Kwan-yin.I remembered that you and I first watch their performace on CCTV,than we all strike by their wonderful performance and cheer up for them.So I'm sure of that you'll love this postcard.And send it to you for keeping.
I'm well in china,please don't worry .now I'm busy with studying accounting,and I need some books about Austrilia accounting.Could you help me borrow it?If you can,please send me as soon as possible.
At last,Our parents are also well,I'll take care of them,please be at ease.
Love you
yours wife

请英语爱好者看看这封信有错吗?Hi,honey,I have receied your letter on March 5,2007.From the letter,I have got a lot of information about your life in Australia.I'm very happy to know that you have absolutely adapted.I don't know whether y
首先称呼就不规范,改为Honey方可
receied改为received
on改为of
have absolutely adapted后加youself to the life there.
are receive改为have received
post office 前应加冠词 a
Dancer改为The dancers
The dance they performed was called thousand-handed Kwan-yin这就话时态应注意The dance they are performing is called thousand-handed Kwan-yin
watch改为watched
than改为then
we all strike改为 we were both striked
cheer up 改为 cheered
去掉of
And后加I
Austrilia ---Austrilian
it-----some
yours---your