这个短文有10处错误 After supper Liu Wei and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cryWhen we asked she live,she said she did not kn

这个短文有10处错误 After supper Liu Wei and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cryWhen we asked she live,she said she did not kn
这个短文有10处错误
After supper Liu Wei and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cryWhen we asked she live,she said she did not know.

这个短文有10处错误 After supper Liu Wei and ask me to go and see a film with him.In our way to the cinema,we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying.We bought her a cake to stop her cryWhen we asked she live,she said she did not kn
1.and去掉
2.ask加ed
3.go后加out
4.in改成on
5.the改成a
6.stop her 加from
7.cry改成crying
8.asked后加where
9.live改成lived
10.said后加that

After supper Liu Wei and(and 去掉） ask(asked) me to go and (and 改为to)see a film with him. In（on) our way to the cinema,we saw the(a) little girl sitting by(at) the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her(she) cry(crying)When we asked(加一个where) she live(lives),she said she did not know。

and ask 改：(1) 去掉and; (2) 并改ask为asked.
In our way改为(3) On our way
the little girl 改为(4) a little girl
by the roadside改为(5) on (或at) the roadside
crying改为(6) was crying
stop her cry...

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and ask 改：(1) 去掉and; (2) 并改ask为asked.
In our way改为(3) On our way
the little girl 改为(4) a little girl
by the roadside改为(5) on (或at) the roadside
crying改为(6) was crying
stop her cry改cry 为(7) from crying (stop sb (from) doing sth，其中from可以省略)
When we asked, 在asked 后面加上(8) where
she live, 改live为(9) lived
go and see,应该改and为(10) to, go to see a film才是对的
终于找到最后一个错的，不能用go and see,应该改and为to, go to see a film才是对的。
另外楼上说she said 后面需要加that，其实不用的，动词后的宾语从句中，that可以省略的，我肯定这是正确的
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After supper Liu Wei asked me to go and see a film with him. On our way to the cinema,we saw a little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her crying.When we asked where she lived ,she said she did not know.
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