帮我找一下此文有没有错,语法或是单词之类的!急,采纳追加As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year.

帮我找一下此文有没有错,语法或是单词之类的!急,采纳追加As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year.
帮我找一下此文有没有错,语法或是单词之类的!急,采纳追加
As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can ― be it money or goods ― to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.
In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world better, for the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
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帮我找一下此文有没有错,语法或是单词之类的!急,采纳追加As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year.
As an example of the power of love,we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year.Although their incomes are still low by international standards,people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can ― be it money or goods ― to help their needy fellow citizens.Moreover,they do this with no thought of gain for themselves..
In my opinion,the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are.We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble,no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers.In this way,we can help to make the world a better place,for the darker the shadows of sorrow become,the more brightly the lamp of love shines.
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