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看看这个movie review 希望大家能指出grammar上的错误.This movie is talking about a normal man,named Dummy.His life is a fake one.Dummy live is a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere,and all his friends and family,are actors who play
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This movie is talking about a normal man,named Dummy.His life is a fake one.Dummy live is a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere,and all his friends and family,are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV show.He’s the star of the show but he doesn’t know.
One day,Dummy finds his life is a show.Everything is fake except Dummy.So Dummy wanted to leave.However,the director will be prevent him.In this world ,the director is god.Sometime,we even know what is true.Dummy was very courageous.He wants to change his fate.I am very envious of him.It is because Dummy have a happy life.He is a successful business man.He has a nice wife and many good friends.If I were him,I would enjoy this life.Although it just a show,I want to.It is because I do not have a complete family.Therefore,I begrudge other people who have the complete family.I once thought I was unfortunate but I was wrong.I appreciate this movie.It let me know nothing is perfect.In the real world,everyone has a lot of regrets.We should be courageous to face our life,like Dummy.Life is like a drama,but the script can be rewritten.
In This movie,the media can deprivation of personal liberty.They can confuse right and wrong.In this world,maybe all is fake,except our family.Family would not leave us in times of difficulty.Therefore,we must cherish our family.
This movie have many message.I will recommend this movie to my friends.
各位高手帮忙把里面的单词改成大众化些的，别人一听就会明白的那种。
例如：ordinary 改成normal
television series 改成 TV show

看看这个movie review 希望大家能指出grammar上的错误.This movie is talking about a normal man,named Dummy.His life is a fake one.Dummy live is a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere,and all his friends and family,are actors who play
下面的有误,已改正.
1.Dummy lives a big
2.So Dummy wants to
3.the director will prevent him
4.Sometimes,we even don't know what is true.
5.It is because Dummy has a happy life
6.Although it is just a show,I still want to attend it.
7.It lets me
8.In this movie,
9.in time of difficulty
10.This movie has many messages

这个电影主要内容是关于一个叫Dummy的普通人。他的生活是虚假的。他生活在一个到处都是摄像头的地方，他的朋友和家人都是在大多数受欢迎的节目中的演员。他是这个节目的明显但他自己却不知道。
一天，Dummy发现了他的生活是假的。出了他自己所有的一切都是假的。所以Dummy想离开。然而，导演会阻止他。总之，导演就是上帝。有时，我们甚至知道什么是真的。Dummy很勇敢。他想改变他的命运。我很羡慕他...

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这个电影主要内容是关于一个叫Dummy的普通人。他的生活是虚假的。他生活在一个到处都是摄像头的地方，他的朋友和家人都是在大多数受欢迎的节目中的演员。他是这个节目的明显但他自己却不知道。
一天，Dummy发现了他的生活是假的。出了他自己所有的一切都是假的。所以Dummy想离开。然而，导演会阻止他。总之，导演就是上帝。有时，我们甚至知道什么是真的。Dummy很勇敢。他想改变他的命运。我很羡慕他。那是因为Dummy有一个快乐的生活。他是一位成功的商人。他有一位善解人意的妻子和很多好朋友。如果我是他，我会很享受生活的。尽管那只是一个节目，但我也想我是他。那是因为我没有一个完整的家。而且，我嫉妒那些有完美家庭的人。曾经我认为自己是不幸的但我错了。我很欣赏这部电影。它让我知道世上没有完美的东西。在这个现实生活中，每个人都有很多遗憾。我们应该勇敢面对我们的生活，就像Dummy。生活就像一场戏，但剧本是可以改写的。
在这部电影中，媒体可以剥夺个人的自由。他们可以混淆白天和黑夜。这个世界里，也许所有事物都是虚假的，除了我们的家人。家人不会在有困难时离开我们。
而且，我们必须珍惜自己的家庭。
这部电影传达了很多信息。我会把它推荐给我得朋友的

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对照原文做了一些修改，改正了一些语法问题，替换了个别单词，但是没有改变句子结构（原文多用简单句）和意思。
This movie is about a normal man, Dummy. His life is a fake one. Dummy lives in a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friend...

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对照原文做了一些修改，改正了一些语法问题，替换了个别单词，但是没有改变句子结构（原文多用简单句）和意思。
This movie is about a normal man, Dummy. His life is a fake one. Dummy lives in a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friends and family members are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV show. He is the star of the show but he doesn’t know.
One day, Dummy finds out his life is a show. Everything is fake except Dummy. So Dummy wants to leave. However, the director will stop him. In that world , the director is god. Sometimes, we don't even know what is true. Dummy was very brave. He wants to change his fate. I am very envious of him. It is because Dummy has a happy life. He is a successful business man. He has a nice wife and many good friends. If I were him, I would enjoy this life, even though it is just a show. It is because I do not have a complete family and I hate people having one. I once thought I was unfortunate but I was wrong. I appreciate this movie. It lets me know nothing is perfect. In the real world, everyone has a lot of regrets. We should be brave to face our life, like Dummy. Life is like a drama, but the script can be rewritten.
In This movie, media can deprive people of liberty, they can make people confuse right with wrong. In this world, maybe all are fake except our family. Family would not leave us in times of difficulty. Therefore, we must cherish them.
This movie takes many messages. I will recommend this movie to my friends.

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