have a friendI have a friend.He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.He do some running every moring.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week.And his eating habit are quite good,too.He eats a lot of vegetable,usually eleven t

have a friendI have a friend.He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.He do some running every moring.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week.And his eating habit are quite good,too.He eats a lot of vegetable,usually eleven t
have a friend
I have a friend.He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.He do some running every moring.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week.And his eating habit are quite good,too.He eats a lot of vegetable,usually eleven to fourteen times a week.He eats fruits every day.He likes milk.He drink them every moring.I and he both love junk food,but he try to eat it only once a week.Oh,he sleeps nine hours at every night.Good food and exercise help he study better.

have a friendI have a friend.He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.He do some running every moring.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week.And his eating habit are quite good,too.He eats a lot of vegetable,usually eleven t
health - healthy
do - does
play - plays
the football 的 the 去掉
two times - twice
habit - habits
begetable - vegetables
fruits - fruit
them - it
I and he 改成 He and I,或者直接改成we
try - tries
at 去掉
he - him
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I have a friend. He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.(healthy)
He do(does) some running every moring.
He play(plays) the(去掉the) football with his friends after school two times(two times改为tw...

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I have a friend. He is Jim.I think he is pretty health.(healthy)
He do(does) some running every moring.
He play(plays) the(去掉the) football with his friends after school two times(two times改为twice) a week.
And his eating habit(habits) are quite good,too.
He eats a lot of vegetable(vegetables),usually eleven to fourteen times a week.
He eats fruits every day.He likes milk. He drink them(it) every moring.I and he(He and I) both love junk food,but he try(tries) to eat it only once a week.Oh, he sleeps nine hours at(不用at) every night.Good food and exercise help he(him) study better.

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1.I think he is pretty health. health改为 healthy 形容词
2.He do some running every moring. 此句中do 改为does 因为是三单
3.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week. 此句中play 改为 p...

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1.I think he is pretty health. health改为 healthy 形容词
2.He do some running every moring. 此句中do 改为does 因为是三单
3.He play the football with his friends after school two times a week. 此句中play 改为 plays 因为是三单 并且去掉 the
4.And his eating habit are quite good,too. 此句中habit 改为habits 因为是复数
5.He eats a lot of vegetable,此句中vegetable 改为vegetables 因为是复数
6.He drink them every moring.此句中drink 改为drinks 因为是三单 并且them改为 it
7.I and he both love junk food,but he try to eat it only once a week.此句中try 改为trys因为是三单 开头改为we both
8.he sleeps nine hours at every night. 去掉at。
9.Good food and exercise help he study better. 此句中he改为him 不是主语 不用he



I have a friend. He is Jim.I think he is pretty healthy.He does some running every moring.He plays football with his friends after school two times a week.And his eating habits are quite good,too.He eats a lot of vegetables,usually eleven to fourteen times a week.He eats fruits every day.He likes milk. He drinks it every moring.we both love junk food,but he trys to eat it only once a week.Oh, he sleeps nine hours every night.Good food and exercise help him study better.

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I have a friend,he is jim ,i think his had a healthy body, he is often does running every morning,he plays football with friends after school twice a week , and his had a good eating habits,too.he ea...

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I have a friend,he is jim ,i think his had a healthy body, he is often does running every morning,he plays football with friends after school twice a week , and his had a good eating habits,too.he eats a lot vegetables ,usually eleven to fourteen times of evey week. he eats fruit every day ,he likes milk , he drink it every morning wo both love junk food ,but he tries to eat it only once a week ,Oh, he sleeps nine hours every night ,good food and exercise help him study better

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