短文改错,十处错误,在线等I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, c

短文改错,十处错误,在线等I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, c
短文改错,十处错误,在线等
I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us．However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends, we would play basketball, swam in the pool or go for a picnic．We are lived in a big family．We treated each other brothers and sisters．If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies, the other student would help him out．It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as never before．

短文改错,十处错误,在线等I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, c
1、I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am(was) then in a school for students from Tibet.As we all left home at a(去掉) early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life.We had to do the washing,cleaning and shopping by us.
2、However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly(helpless和前一形容词一致做表语).We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends,we would play basketall,swam(swim省略了谓语中的would) in the pool or go for a picnic.
3、We are lived (living用现在分词构成进行时)in a big family.We treated each other (加上as) brothers and sisters.
4、If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies,the other student (students因为the other修饰复数名词)would help him out.
5、It has been five years when（since） we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as never (去掉never)before.

I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am(was) then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a (an) early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had t...

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I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am(was) then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a (an) early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us(ourselves)．However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly (helpless)．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends, we would play basketball, swam in the pool or go for a picnic．We are (删除 are ) lived in a big family．We treated each other （like）brothers and sisters．If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies, the other student would help him out．It has been five years when （since） we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as （ever）never before．

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1.I am then --was 2.at a early age---an 3. by us--ourselves 4.helplessly---helpless 5.swam in the pool---swim 6.are lived 去掉are
7.treated each other as brothers and sisters
8.any--some
9.when we graduated---since
10.never 去掉

I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I was then a student from Tibet．As we all left home at an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, clean...

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I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I was then a student from Tibet．As we all left home at an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping．However, we seldom felt lonely or helpless．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends, we would play basketball, swam in the pool or went for a picnic．We lived in a big family．We treated each other as brothers and sisters．If any one had difficulty in his studies, the other students would help him out．It has been five years since we graduated, but the memories are as sweet as never before．仅供参考！

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