帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,(每行一个）When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1.)there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2.)had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3.)the message told Mr Smith would appreciate
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帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,(每行一个）When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1.)there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2.)had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3.)the message told Mr Smith would appreciate
帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,(每行一个）
When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1.)
there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2.)
had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3.)
the message told Mr Smith would appreciate my(4.)
answering to the call as soon as I came in.I had(5.)
no idea that who he was or what he wanted,(6.)
but I thought I'd better telephone him.(7.)
I noticed that there wasno telephone number after all(8.)
and I wondered how the telephone operator would(9.)
take an important message as this for me without writing the telephone number.(10.)
帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,(每行一个）When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1.)there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2.)had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3.)the message told Mr Smith would appreciate
(1.got back后面加to,指定回到的地点 )
(2.notice改meeeage,有一个消息,便条.而不是通知.而且主要下面第4行也用了meeage )
(3.去掉that,多余 )
(4.told改said,tell要加sb)
(5.去掉to,多余 )
(6.去掉that,多余 )
.(7.正确 )
(8.after改all,竟然没电话号码 )
(9.how改why,为什么接线员把如此重要的信息留给我却没有写下电话号码呢)
（10writing后加down,写下电话号码.as似乎对,like像的意思）
第8个 after--- at
第九个 would ---could
其他的与楼上的同