请帮忙看下下面这段英文邮件是否有语法错误或者不符合外国人语言习惯的地方,Dear mario:Thanks for your letter!I got what you worry about.Actually,you will find that it's a new TV when you replaced with this item.The pr
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请帮忙看下下面这段英文邮件是否有语法错误或者不符合外国人语言习惯的地方,Dear mario:Thanks for your letter!I got what you worry about.Actually,you will find that it's a new TV when you replaced with this item.The pr
请帮忙看下下面这段英文邮件是否有语法错误或者不符合外国人语言习惯的地方,
Dear mario:
Thanks for your letter!
I got what you worry about.Actually,you will find that it's a new TV when you replaced with this item.
The price is the uniform pricing,and our products are never cuts prices.
I will try to discuss with my boss,although it's a very difficult task.Hope God is on our side.
要表达的意思是:
我明白你的意思.实际上你换上这个以后会发现这就是一台新的电视机.
我们的价格是统一定价,而且没有优惠的先例
我会试着和老板说说,虽然这事很难办.希望上帝站在我们这边
这是一封回复邮件,客户看到我们的产品后说太贵了,和买个新的电视差不多,希望重新给个价格
请帮忙看下下面这段英文邮件是否有语法错误或者不符合外国人语言习惯的地方,Dear mario:Thanks for your letter!I got what you worry about.Actually,you will find that it's a new TV when you replaced with this item.The pr
I got what you worry about改为I know what you worry about
replaced改为replace
Hope God is on our side.改为Wish God on our side.
cuts prices改为cut prices.
没有语法错误,很好。
但是后边的our side改为your side更好
Dear mario,
Thanks for you letter.
I got what you worry about. Actually ,you will find our products are new TV when you use them.
I am sure you will find our products are of g...
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Dear mario,
Thanks for you letter.
I got what you worry about. Actually ,you will find our products are new TV when you use them.
I am sure you will find our products are of good quality in favorable price.
If you can make a big order, I will try to discuss with my boss to cut down the price,although it is a diffcult task. Or you can make a small trial order.
Look forward to your promp reply.
希望这个对你有帮助。
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个人认为还是重写较好。否则客户看了会笑话的。