或改些高级语句或优美的时间过得真快啊,现在已经是回家的第四天了.今天没什么事发生,但我很开心因为只要和我家人在一起,我就会感到很满足.我现在想的是时间可以过得慢点,能让我和家

或改些高级语句或优美的时间过得真快啊,现在已经是回家的第四天了.今天没什么事发生,但我很开心因为只要和我家人在一起,我就会感到很满足.我现在想的是时间可以过得慢点,能让我和家
或改些高级语句或优美的
时间过得真快啊,现在已经是回家的第四天了.今天没什么事发生,但我很开心因为只要和我家人在一起,我就会感到很满足.我现在想的是时间可以过得慢点,能让我和家人相处更久的时间.其次,我很不想长大因为我越大,我父母也会更老.我不想这样.我想永远做我父母的小孩子.我不想长大的另外一个原因是我还没做好准备去独立.然而,那些这是我想的,现实还是现实,不可能像我想的那样.我只能去珍惜每一天和适应现实 Time flies!Now it has already been the fourth day I came home.Nothing special happened today,but I enjoyed myself very much just because as long as I stay with my family,I will feel satisfied.What I really want now is the time can slow down,which makes me can be together with my family longer time.Moreover.I wouldn't like to grow up extremely because the older I will be.the older my parent will be.I don't want it like this,I wish I can forever be my parent's little son.The other reason for I don' t want to grow up is that I am still not ready for taking responsibility for independence.Nevertheless,those are just what I wish,reality is still reality.It's impossible for what I wish.I am just suppose to cherish everyday and fit the fact.Good night.

或改些高级语句或优美的时间过得真快啊,现在已经是回家的第四天了.今天没什么事发生,但我很开心因为只要和我家人在一起,我就会感到很满足.我现在想的是时间可以过得慢点,能让我和家
文章写得不错.只是有一些小错误.稍作修改,以供参考.
the fourth day since I came
longer time去掉time
my parents
my parents'
It's impossible to go as I wish.

since I came home/ I feel satisfied / What I wish now is to slow down the pace of time so that I can have more time staying with my family. / 'moreover' and 'nevertheless' is some kinda weir...

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since I came home/ I feel satisfied / What I wish now is to slow down the pace of time so that I can have more time staying with my family. / 'moreover' and 'nevertheless' is some kinda weird logically / the older I become /i wish i could be my parents'... / the other reason why... / It's impossible for everything to go exactly like what I am looking forward to. / I am supposed to
Life is just like a journey, we admire our parents 'cause we believe they can rescue us in some way. However, the time we recognize the fact, we must learn to rescue ourselves.
From diaper to shroud, it's just several decades, we should live it up 'cause sooner or later we will experience a long-time death. Cherish all you have and enjoy youself!

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