求修改语法病句!Do you know what kinds of skills you have to develop,if you living in a foreign country?Thesis Statement:Living in a foreign country,it is important to learn how to cook by yourself if you don’t fit the food in foreign country

求修改语法病句!Do you know what kinds of skills you have to develop,if you living in a foreign country?Thesis Statement:Living in a foreign country,it is important to learn how to cook by yourself if you don’t fit the food in foreign country
求修改语法病句!
Do you know what kinds of skills you have to develop,if you living in a foreign country?
Thesis Statement:
Living in a foreign country,it is important to learn how to cook by yourself if you don’t fit the food in foreign country and how to make friends with international friends.
Topic Sentence 1:
Cook by yourself and keep a balance diet are good for you health.
Topic Sentence 2:
You can learn many things what you don’t know from international friends and it can enrich our life and broaden our outlook.
Conclusion (
Foreign countries have a different way of life from ours,we need to observe carefully and learn something we don’t know.I hope all those who are studying abroad can living well in the foreign country.

求修改语法病句!Do you know what kinds of skills you have to develop,if you living in a foreign country?Thesis Statement:Living in a foreign country,it is important to learn how to cook by yourself if you don’t fit the food in foreign country
Do you know what kinds of skills you have to develop,if you living in a foreign country?
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Thesis Statement:
Living in a foreign country,it is important to learn how to cook by yourself if you don’t fit the food in foreign country and how to make friends with international friends.
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Topic Sentence 1:
Cook by yourself and keep a balance diet are good for you health.
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Topic Sentence 2:
You can learn many things what you don’t know from international friends and it can enrich our life and broaden our outlook.
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Conclusion
Foreign countries have a different way of life from ours,we need to observe carefully and learn something we don’t know.I hope all those who are studying abroad can living well in the foreign country.
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