求一段英文摘要修改意见,写美国总统选举的,摘要：2008年奥巴马当选为美国史上首位黑人总统,电视及网络等媒体对美国总统选举广泛的跟踪报导,使每一届美国总统选举都引来全球关注的目

求一段英文摘要修改意见,写美国总统选举的,摘要：2008年奥巴马当选为美国史上首位黑人总统,电视及网络等媒体对美国总统选举广泛的跟踪报导,使每一届美国总统选举都引来全球关注的目
求一段英文摘要修改意见,写美国总统选举的,
摘要：2008年奥巴马当选为美国史上首位黑人总统,电视及网络等媒体对美国总统选举广泛的跟踪报导,使每一届美国总统选举都引来全球关注的目光.这与美国总统的权力、美国总统选举选举的过程及美国总统选举的特色特点有莫大关系.本文从美国总统的权力、选举的过程和选举的特色3个方面介绍复杂的美国总统的选举制度.
关键词：美国；总统；选举 tracking report
Abstract：In 2008,Obama was elected the president of American ,and he was the first black president in the history of America.Television and networks,and other media made a wide-ranging tracking report of the U.S.presidential election ,which made each session of the U.S.presidential election so attractive to the whole world.And this was closely related to the power of the U.S.president、the process of the presidential election and the characteristics of the U.S.presidential election.This article will introduce the complex electoral system of America from the above 3 aspects.
哪里翻译得不好 请指出
另外 关键词可以忽略 一时手快 呵呵

求一段英文摘要修改意见,写美国总统选举的,摘要：2008年奥巴马当选为美国史上首位黑人总统,电视及网络等媒体对美国总统选举广泛的跟踪报导,使每一届美国总统选举都引来全球关注的目
这里用black不好,不如用 African-American .
president of American 改成 president of the United States
which made each session of the U.S.presidential election so attractive to the whole world.这句感觉有点罗嗦,which brought the world's attention to each U.S.presidential election .

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In 2008 the Austria Pama was elected as the American history in first place black president, media and so on television and network reported to the US presidential election widespread track that, causes each session of US presidential election all to bring in the global attention the vision.This with the American president's authority, the US presidential election election process and the US presidential election characteristic characteristic has the greatest relations.This article from the American president's authority, the election process and the election characteristic 3 aspects introduces the complex American president's electoral system.
这我翻译得，不知道啊好

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