我要写一封信给寄宿家庭,请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误或让外国人误解的地方或是英美式英文的误用Dear Ryan and Kathy,This is Wang Haishu.My English name is Tom,so call me Tom is OK.My flight is on January 31,fro

我要写一封信给寄宿家庭,请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误或让外国人误解的地方或是英美式英文的误用Dear Ryan and Kathy,This is Wang Haishu.My English name is Tom,so call me Tom is OK.My flight is on January 31,fro
我要写一封信给寄宿家庭,请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误或让外国人误解的地方或是英美式英文的误用
Dear Ryan and Kathy,
This is Wang Haishu.My English name is Tom,so call me Tom is OK.
My flight is on January 31,from Shanghai to Vancouver and I will arrive at Vancouver airport on 7:50a.m.local time.Then I will be taken to your home in Maple Ridge.
Because there are too many things I want to bring with me but there are only three suitcases I can take.So I will send some packages to your home before I go to Vancouver.If the packages arrive at your home ahead of me,please help me keep them.
This is my first time to go abroad.Would you have some recommendations on anything that I should know or be prepared for?
Thanks for letting me stay at your home.I am looking forward to seeing your family.
Yours sincerely
Tom

我要写一封信给寄宿家庭,请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误或让外国人误解的地方或是英美式英文的误用Dear Ryan and Kathy,This is Wang Haishu.My English name is Tom,so call me Tom is OK.My flight is on January 31,fro
Dear Ryan and Kathy,
This is Wang Haishu from China.My English name is Tom,so call me Tom.
My flight is on January 31,from Shanghai to Vancouver and I will arrive at Vancouver airport on 7:50a.m.local time.Then I will be taken to your home in Maple Ridge.
Because there are too many things I want to bring ,but there are only three suitcases I can take.So I will send some packages to your home before I go to Vancouver.If the packages arrive at your home ahead of my arrival,please help me keep them.
This is my first time to go abroad.Would you have some suggestions for me on anything that I should know or be prepared for?
Thanks for your hospitality.I am looking forward to seeing your family.
Yours sincerely
Tom
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Dear Ryan and Kathy,
My name is Wang Haishu and my English name is Tom. (call me tom什么的没必要）
My flight is on January 31,from Shanghai to Vancouver, and I will arrive at Vancouver airport at 7:5...

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Dear Ryan and Kathy,
My name is Wang Haishu and my English name is Tom. (call me tom什么的没必要）
My flight is on January 31,from Shanghai to Vancouver, and I will arrive at Vancouver airport at 7:50a.m.local time. Then I will be taken to your home in Maple Ridge.
Because there are too many things I want to bring with me but there are only three suitcases I can take, so I will send some packages to your home before I go to Vancouver. If the packages arrive at your house ahead of me, please keep them for me.
This is my first time to go abroad. Would you have some recommendations on anything that I should know or be prepared for ahead of time?
Thanks for letting me stay at your home. I am looking forward to seeing your family.
Yours sincerely
Tom
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没有大问题。帮您修改了一下，整了一些小的语法错误，并且尝试着尽量帮你改得地道一些。希望能够满意：）
Dear Ryan and Kathy,
My Chinese name is Wang Haishu, you can call me Tom instead.
My Shanghai-Vancouver flight is on January 31,and will ...

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没有大问题。帮您修改了一下，整了一些小的语法错误，并且尝试着尽量帮你改得地道一些。希望能够满意：）
Dear Ryan and Kathy,
My Chinese name is Wang Haishu, you can call me Tom instead.
My Shanghai-Vancouver flight is on January 31,and will arrive at Vancouver airport at 7:50 a.m.local time. After that I will be taken to your home in Maple Ridge.
As there are so many things I want to bring yet only three suitcases can be taken along with, I will send some packages to your home before I take off.So, if the packages arrive at your home ahead of me, please help me keep them.
This is my first time abroad. So I will be very grateful if you can give some recommendations on everything that I should know or be prepared for.
Thanks for letting me stay at your home. I am looking forward to seeing your family.
Yours sincerely
Tom

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