大家好,我想问一下大家,我这个英语句式对吗?The dormitory need to be added a tv every floors,which will be played back programs on leisure time.
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大家好,我想问一下大家,我这个英语句式对吗?The dormitory need to be added a tv every floors,which will be played back programs on leisure time.
大家好,我想问一下大家,我这个英语句式对吗?
The dormitory need to be added a tv every floors,which will be played back programs on leisure time.
大家好,我想问一下大家,我这个英语句式对吗?The dormitory need to be added a tv every floors,which will be played back programs on leisure time.
错误一：The dormitory need to be added a tv
实意动词need有两种用法：
行为者需要做某事：need to do sth.(要跟不定式的主动语态)
行为对象需要被做了：
1.need doing （跟动名词,其主语是动名词的逻辑宾语）
2.need to be done (跟不定式的被动语态,其主语是不定式的逻辑宾语)
所以 The dormitory need to be added a tv 中出现了两个宾语,一是配备电视,一是配备宿舍（后者既不合情理用人不合逻辑）,因此必须改为下列中的一种：
1.We need to add a TV in the dormitory.
2.A TV needs adding in the dormitory.
3.A TV needs to be added in the dormitory.
错误二：every floors
1.every floors 前后矛盾,every 每一个表示单数,而 floors却是复数；
2.floor 前应该有介词 on
3.前面的 The dormitory 是单数,后面又说是每一层,也存在矛盾.
正确的讲法应该是：We need to add a TV in each dormitory on every floor.
错误三：which will be played back programs
明显是个定语从句,关系词 which 指代 TV,“电视将被播放”恐怕说不通吧!播放的应该是电视节目.所以应改为 on which programs will be played back
错误四：on leisure time
介词 on 只用在表示具体的日子上,如：on Sunday,on Sep.27,on that morning,但不能用于表示时刻,这里需要改为：at leisure time.顺便提一句,on time 到使用了on,但那已经不是具体时刻了,而是表示准时.
The dormitorys of every floors need a tv, which will be played back programs on leisure time.
对的吧
The dormitory need to be equipped with a TV set every floor, with which we can spend our leisure time.