帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病1.The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and

帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病1.The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and
帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病
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The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and siter all study in university,so she lives with her mother now,Shawn Johnson is her idol.
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The second number is Xiaoming.Nothing he likes very much and he hard English best.He and his partner Xiaodong,there are all five number in their family.
3.
Xiaodong is 17 years old.There is a borther and a siter in his family.He is the most small one.Xiaodong has many hobbies,such as playing computer game,watching TV,plaing basketball and so on.

帮忙检查这几段句子有没有语病1.The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and
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The first number is Xiaohong,she is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping,she likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but her English is poor.Her borther and siter all study in university,so she lives with her mother now,Shawn Johnson is her idol.
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The second number is Xiaoming.(半倒装)Nothing does he like very much and his English is best in our class.He and his partner Xiaodong,there are five number in their family.
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Xiaodong is 17 years old.He has a borther and a siter.He is the youngest one in his family.Xiaodong has many hobbies,such as playing computer game,watching TV,plaing basketball and so on.

OK啦哦~

1.句子结构没多大问题~不过,没有连词承接.要改正.
The first number is Xiaohong.(句号）She is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping.(句号）She likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledg...

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1.句子结构没多大问题~不过,没有连词承接.要改正.
The first number is Xiaohong.(句号）She is a lazy girl,so she doesn't like shopping.(句号）She likes reading novels at home and she also likes English,but the English knowledge that she has known is poor.Her borther and siter all study in university, so she lives with her mother now,and（注意连词） Shawn Johnson is her idol.
如果不改句号可用连词and代替.
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The second number is Xiaoming.He has no particular interest.(he hard English best这个我不知道到底要说什么.
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Xiaodong is 17 years old.He has a brother and sister and he is the most little one in his family.He has many hobbies,such as playing computer game,watching TV,plaing basketball and so on.
大体还好，不错～

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1) The first one is ··· 或 The number one is···
her english knowledge就行了
brother
all ->both
university -> universities
2）brother
Nothing he likes very much and he hard Eng...

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1) The first one is ··· 或 The number one is···
her english knowledge就行了
brother
all ->both
university -> universities
2）brother
Nothing he likes very much and he hard English best这句有问题 ,看不懂
number -> menbers
in his family
3）He is the most small one这句是错的，年龄最大或最小的家庭成员都有专称
playing a···game 或 playing ··· games
playing basketball

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