以下是两篇英语文废写的习作,I went to The Great Wall on vacation last month.I got up early and by train in the morning.It took me about six hours to get here.The weather was very hot.The scene was very nice.A lot of people went here.I arr

以下是两篇英语文废写的习作,I went to The Great Wall on vacation last month.I got up early and by train in the morning.It took me about six hours to get here.The weather was very hot.The scene was very nice.A lot of people went here.I arr
以下是两篇英语文废写的习作,
I went to The Great Wall on vacation last month.I got up early and by train in the morning.It took me about six hours to get here.The weather was very hot.The scene was very nice.A lot of people went here.
I arrived at the top of The Geart Wall.I felt tired,but I thought it is interesting.
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Yesterday,I went to school at seven o'clock .First,I cleaned the ground with my friends.
Next,I did my homework because I wanted go to bed early in the night.Then,I listened
to my teacher classes.After school,I studied English at home.I was tired,but I felt interesting.

以下是两篇英语文废写的习作,I went to The Great Wall on vacation last month.I got up early and by train in the morning.It took me about six hours to get here.The weather was very hot.The scene was very nice.A lot of people went here.I arr
I went to The Great Wall on vacation last month.I got up early and (went there) by train（By train只能做状语,你缺少动词） in the morning.It took me about six hours to get here.The weather was very hot.The scene was very nice.A lot of people went here.
I arrived at the top of The Geart Wall.I felt tired,but I thought it is （应该改成was,前后时态要一致）interesting.
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Yesterday,I went to school at seven o'clock .First,I cleaned the ground with my friends.
Next,I did my homework because I wanted go to bed early in the（in the应该替换为at,没有in the night的用法,只有at night,表示在晚上) night.Then,I listened to my teacher classes (应该改为had lessons,表示上课）.After school,I studied English at home.I was tired,but I felt interesting.
我仅仅是修改语法错误,不修改句子的意思或者文章的流畅性,

没错啦 （虽然我一个字也没看懂）