————求专家帮我批改这篇英语作文,能得多少分?
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————求专家帮我批改这篇英语作文,能得多少分?
————求专家帮我批改这篇英语作文,能得多少分?
————求专家帮我批改这篇英语作文,能得多少分?
首先你的题目没有审清楚,它是推荐信,所以是信函类的写作方式,因此你的作文格式有误.这一点在作文中是大忌,阅卷者会认为你犯了大忌,因为你连基本的写作要求都没有看清楚.所以对于满分为25分的这篇文章而言,你的分数不会很高,甚至可能会比较低.大概10分左右.所以下次写作一定要认真审题.
接着就来修改一下你的推荐信.给你小小的看一下推荐信的格式,希望对您的下次写作能有帮助.
以下是我的手打稿
Dear Sir or Madam:
As a clerk of China Bank,I'm writing the recommandation letter with great sincerity to furnish you with my knowledge of my friend WangLin.
WangLin was graduated from university for three years,and his job is a lawyer.What's important,his language skill is pretty good ,especially the ability of communicating in english.WangLin is sincerity in deaing with people,so he built a good relationship with all the people around him.He had been competent ,punctual and organized whom has three years experiences in this area.
If you are interested in ,please call at 023-63335550 or send to the following address :NO.148,people's road in chongqin city.
I will be appreciated if you take his paalication into serious consideration.
Yours Sincerely
LiMing
China Bank