请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buyA:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy many beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute things in my shop…B:On.It sound very n

请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buyA:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy many beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute things in my shop…B:On.It sound very n
请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!
A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy
A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy many beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute things in my shop…
B:On.It sound very nice,umm..I want buy a watch to my mother for her birthday present.Is there any beautiful watch?
A:Oh.I’m sorry about it.We don’t have any watch to sell.But you can buy the other things instead for it.I promised,you can buy everything in my shop.

请跟我看一看我的英文文法对不对!A:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buyA:hi,young lady.Welcome to the ’everything’ shop.You can buy many beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute things in my shop…B:On.It sound very n
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beautiful,pretty ,useful,cute 重复,also,it should be as below,pretty ,useful,and cute
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It sounds very nice.单数第三人称
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her birthday is coming.她的生日要到了,or,
today is her birthday.今天是她的生日
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instead of it,not for it
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the other things sound like the rest things other than the watch
so,maybe you can say,
something else,or some other staff,
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Since you do not have the watch,it is better not to say you can find everything in your shop.

B:.........i want to buy a watch for my mother as her birthday present
固定搭配(want to do sth, buy sth for sb, 这里的AS是“当做、作为”的意思
第二个A：.......instead of (这也是固定的）
我只能找到这么多了

1.beautiful, pretty 重复
2. It sound very nice， 三人称单数。 sound改sounds
3. I want buy a watch to my mother for her birthday present. (want后跟不定式，改want to buy) 介词有错误，为我的母亲买的，改to为for 作为她的礼物可以，改第二个f...

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1.beautiful, pretty 重复
2. It sound very nice， 三人称单数。 sound改sounds
3. I want buy a watch to my mother for her birthday present. (want后跟不定式，改want to buy) 介词有错误，为我的母亲买的，改to为for 作为她的礼物可以，改第二个for为as 或直接for her，不用present.
4.Oh. I’m sorry about it. about it多余
5.But you can buy the other things instead for it。 instead of 固定搭配
6.I promised 时态不对，应该是一般现在时 i promise

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为什么你总用buy？