请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账....In fact,hard-working will keeps us busy and forget something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness a

请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账....In fact,hard-working will keeps us busy and forget something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness a
请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账.
...In fact,hard-working will keeps us busy and forget something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness and never left regret.
There is a classmate who is mine,studying hard every day.even if in weekend,she was give uo his ret times to study,Though she hardly rest,she is still happy.Because it is excited for her to get a brilliant result.
The majoritu of students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons why students hate study is that their lost interest in it..

请帮我把这段英语文字的错误指出,并改得高级一点,最好要有许多亮点.我写的太流水账....In fact,hard-working will keeps us busy and forget something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness a
In fact,hard-working will keeps【语法错误】 us busy and forget 【加to等】 something bad【表意不清】.as【大写,空格】 a student,I must study hard,【定语指代不清】which can make me full of hopeness【词汇错误】 and never left regret【用法奇怪】.
There is a classmate who is mine【用法歧义】,studying hard every day.even if in weekend,she was give uo his【到底男的女的】 ret 【拼写】times to study,Though she hardly rest【语法】,she is still happy.Because it is excited【exciting】 for her to get a brilliant result【我没懂...】.
The majoritu【这是什么= =】 of students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons why students hate study is that their lost interest in it.
【问题太多了我给你改改吧】
In fact,being hardworking allows us to keep busy and forget the bad things in our lifes.As a student,I must study hard in order to keep me hopeful,but never regretful.
There is a classmate of mine who studies hard every day.Even in weekends,she would give up her spare time to study more.Though she hardly rests,she still looks happy,because it is exciting for her to work towards a brilliant goal.
The majority of students are bored with studying.The reason why students hate studying,from my perspective,is that they have long lost their interest in it.
在美国生活多年...改的应该没问题

In fact,hard-working will let us become busy and forget something bad.As you can see,I am a.student so I must study hard.Because at least,it can make me let me full of hopeness and never regret my de...

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In fact,hard-working will let us become busy and forget something bad.As you can see,I am a.student so I must study hard.Because at least,it can make me let me full of hopeness and never regret my decision.
I have a good friend in my class and she studys very hard every day until late at night.She is even very strict with herself.For instance,she did not go to sleep until she finished herlearning task which planed by herself.Even if it is in the weekend,she has to time to have a rest and still studys lvery hard until late at night as usual.Her weekend timetable is full of training lessons.So she have already learnt so much knowledgewhich is more difficult,or even much more difficult than the knowledge we learn in the school.Though she hardly has a rest but she is still happy.So it is a picec of cake for her to win the prices and it is also exciting for her to get a brilliant result.
The majoritu of students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons why students hate study is that their lost interest in it.
我最后一段没有看懂，所以没有帮你改。你有很多的拼写错误和语法错误，并且有的句子需要很长时间才能读懂。

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...In fact,hard-working will keeps(keep) us busy and forget(forgetting) something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness(hope) and never left regret.(be regretful).
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...In fact,hard-working will keeps(keep) us busy and forget(forgetting) something bad.as a student,I must study hard,which can make me full of hopeness(hope) and never left regret.(be regretful).
There is a classmate who(删) is(of) mine,（who）studying hard every day.even if in weekend(weekends),she was（will） give uo(删) his ret(spare) times(time) to study,Though she hardly rest(rests),she is still happy.Because it is excited for her to get a brilliant result(high score).
The majoritu(majority) of(the) students feel bored with study,as for me,the reasons(reason) why students hate study is that their(they) lost(have no) interest in it. .....

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首先，英语最忌讳重复，而你这段重复了很多work hard,可以去掉几个,用它的近义词diligent。我把改过的文章直接打出来了，改了很多部分。
hard working will keep us busy and forget badthings. As a student, I must study hard, it can make me full of hope and neve...

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首先，英语最忌讳重复，而你这段重复了很多work hard,可以去掉几个,用它的近义词diligent。我把改过的文章直接打出来了，改了很多部分。
hard working will keep us busy and forget badthings. As a student, I must study hard, it can make me full of hope and never left any regret.
My classmate, who is diligent every day,even on the weekend.She spend almost all of her rest time studying, though she hardly ever take a rest, she is still happy. Because it is so excited for her to get a good result.
The majorities of students get bored with study,as far as I'm concerned, the reason why they hate study is that their lack of interest.

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