这篇作文能打多少分加入你是玉林高中高一（1）班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下：1介绍新学校的情况：校园美丽,很多树木；老师工作很努力,同学
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这篇作文能打多少分加入你是玉林高中高一（1）班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下：1介绍新学校的情况：校园美丽,很多树木；老师工作很努力,同学
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加入你是玉林高中高一（1）班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下：1介绍新学校的情况：校园美丽,很多树木；老师工作很努力,同学对人友善,2怀念过去：想念王平以及过去的美好时光；与他相处好,患难与共.3个人观点：友谊重要,希望互相保持联系.100词左右,参考词汇：senior middle school 保持联系：keep in touch
下面是作文：
Dear Wang Ping,
How are you doing?I'm now studying in Yulin senior middle school.I was so surprised than I came here.I could see beautiful flowers and tall trees everywhere.
This is the most beautiful school I have been.And the teachers are hard-working.I love my classmates because they are so friendly than I treat them as my fimilies,they help me a lot.
However,I still remember the days which we studyed and played together.I miss you very much.You got well with me and shared happiness and sorrow with me.I'm thanks to you.
I think a friendship is important.We still are friends in future.Please keep in touch.
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这篇作文能打多少分加入你是玉林高中高一（1）班的学生李华,你的好朋友上了另一所高中,请给王平写一封信,具体内容如下：1介绍新学校的情况：校园美丽,很多树木；老师工作很努力,同学
I was so surprised than I came here. than 改成when
This is the most beautiful school I have been. 最后加to或者 i have ever seen
because they are so friendly than I treat them as my fimilies, than 改成that/and
I still remember the days which we studyed and played together. which 改成 when
I'm thanks to you. 改成 thank you. 或者 i'm grateful to you.
I think a friendship is important. 去掉a
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