I have worked in a multi-national company for more than one year.I work as the translator of finacial department,I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administration work about Japanese staff.

I have worked in a multi-national company for more than one year.I work as the translator of finacial department,I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administration work about Japanese staff.
I have worked in a multi-national company for more than one year.I work as the translator of finacial department,I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administration work about Japanese staff.

I have worked in a multi-national company for more than one year.I work as the translator of finacial department,I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administration work about Japanese staff.
语法上没什么大问题 但不太顺畅 我帮你稍改一下
I have been working as a translator in finacial department of a multi-national company for more than one year.
And I am in charge of some meeting interpretations ,files translations and the administration of Japanese staff.
最主要的问题是时态 have worked 表示以前是 现在不是 后一句就不应该用一般现在时 而是过去时
另外关于不定冠词的用法有些混乱,你对照下
还有就是要注意把逗号变成句号 一句话主谓宾齐全 就是一个句号

I have been working as a translator and interpretor in finance department for more than one year.I am in charge of the interpretation of meetings,some files translation and administration of Japanese staff.

I work as the translator---把THE 改为A
I work as the translator of finacial department,---豆号改为句号，且把OF 改为IN.
I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administrat...

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I work as the translator---把THE 改为A
I work as the translator of finacial department,---豆号改为句号，且把OF 改为IN.
I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting,some files translation and administration work about Japanese staff.-------MEETING后加S。WORK后面同样加S---因为这是指具体的工作，可数。

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首先可以用 worked，不必用完成时。
其次是 as a translator
然后i was in charge
最好在some files 前加上and
最后可以用 of Japanese staff.

I worked as a translator and interpretor in finance department.I was in charge of the interpretation of meetings,some files translation and administration of Japanese staff.

I have （worked改为been working) in a multi-national company for more than one year.
I work as （the改为a） translator of finacial department（,）改为（.）
I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting（加...

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I have （worked改为been working) in a multi-national company for more than one year.
I work as （the改为a） translator of finacial department（,）改为（.）
I am in charge of the interpretation of meeting（加s）,（some files translation ）改为（the translation of some files）
and (加上the) administration (删去work) （about改为of） Japanese staff.

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have worked 改为 have been working 表示这段时间还在继续 因为你后面有for....year这个时间段修饰
假如你的财政部只有你一个 可以用the 假如你只是其中一员 就用a
前面有interpretation 了 后面的 translation可以省略 因为你就是一个译员 既要现场的会议翻译又要文笔类的笔译 所以直接用 interpretation...

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have worked 改为 have been working 表示这段时间还在继续 因为你后面有for....year这个时间段修饰
假如你的财政部只有你一个 可以用the 假如你只是其中一员 就用a
前面有interpretation 了 后面的 translation可以省略 因为你就是一个译员 既要现场的会议翻译又要文笔类的笔译 所以直接用 interpretation就可以了
最后的about 改为of
没有了

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