谁来修改下面的语法I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX depar

谁来修改下面的语法I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX depar
谁来修改下面的语法
I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX department for half a year,then worked in XX department and have done some technical works for more two years,now I am planning to develope in XX Management Department.
我叫XXX,来自XX,是一名大专生.有良好的沟通和协调能力,责任心强,有一定的逻辑分析能力及处理问题的能力.曾在XX部门做过半年,之后在XX部门做过两年多技术活,现在打算往XX管理部门这方面发展
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修改一个英文单词为associate

谁来修改下面的语法I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX depar
你应该说毕业自哪间大学.哪有说自己是大专生这样含糊不清的
I m xxx.I graduated from the University of XXX (xxx大学) and have ever worked in the XX department for half a year,after then I have worked as a technician in the XX department.I think responsibility is the most important factor for doing a god job.And this belief helped me a lot in my work.I acquired good skills of communication,coordination,logical analysis and problem solving from my past working experience.Now I think I have got the capacity am I am ready for a position in XX Managemant Department.
你这些语句改成这样比较恰当：
我叫xxx,毕业自xx大学.曾在XX部门做过半年,之后在XX部门担任技术人员.我认为责任感是做好工作的最重要因素,而这个信念在我的工作中帮助了我很多.从过去的工作经验中,我获得了良好的沟通和协调能力,还有逻辑分析能力及处理问题的能力.现在我已经准备好,也相信我自己能够胜任在XX管理部门的职位.

I am a assosiate student called XXX and I come from XX. I equip the abilities of communication and coordination, responsibility and Team spirit as well . I also a person who with the abilities o...

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I am a assosiate student called XXX and I come from XX. I equip the abilities of communication and coordination, responsibility and Team spirit as well . I also a person who with the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions. I was a worker in XX department half a year ago , then worked in XX department and have done some technical works for more two years,but now I am planning to develop in XX Management Department.

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大专生是college student
应该改成
I have the ability of good communication,coordination,responsibility, and logic analysis.I'm able to deal with problems.
some technical works：s去掉
for more ...

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大专生是college student
应该改成
I have the ability of good communication,coordination,responsibility, and logic analysis.I'm able to deal with problems.
some technical works：s去掉
for more two years(two 可以不要)

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