请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?let me introduce me to you.I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.I like sports ,I

请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?let me introduce me to you.I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.I like sports ,I
请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?
let me introduce me to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.
要写介绍自己的英语作文了,写好了,
请各位大虾帮我看看,检查检查!
我要的是速度和准确!
好的我可以追加的!
我觉得最后一句读起来不通顺，

请各位大虾帮我看看下面的句子在语法上面有错吗?let me introduce me to you.I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.she think we should eat a lot healthy foods such as apples and fish every day.I like sports ,I
第一句的第二个me建议改成myself,更好一点.
第二句很好~
第三句she thinks we should eat a lot of(lots of也行)healthy food such as apples and fish every day.
第四句也没错~

let me introduce myself to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she thinks we should eat a lot of healthy food, such as apples and fishes every day.
I like s...

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let me introduce myself to you.
I am a student in Class Four,Grade Six of xxx Primary school.
she thinks we should eat a lot of healthy food, such as apples and fishes every day.
I like sports ,I like playing badminton,basketball,football and swimming.
but I am only good at playing badminton.

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let me introduce myself to you
she thinks a lot of such like
把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面

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she thinks a lot of healthy food going swimming 你的句子写的比较生硬 没帮你改 只是挑出几个明显的错误最后一句没有问题吗？？没有错“最快回答”说把第四句的swimming放在playing......的前面
这样通顺一点对吗？I like swimming and playin...

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she thinks a lot of healthy food going swimming 你的句子写的比较生硬 没帮你改 只是挑出几个明显的错误

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