我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert.During some point of the journey they had an argument,and one friend slapped the other one in the face.The one who got

我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert.During some point of the journey they had an argument,and one friend slapped the other one in the face.The one who got
我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,
The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert.During some point of the journey they had an argument,and one friend slapped the other one in the face.
The one who got slapped felt hurt,but without saying anything,wrote in the sand:"Today my best friend slapped me in the face."
They kept on walking until they found an oasis,where they decided to take a bath.The one who had been slapped got stuck in the mire and started drowning,but the friend saved him.
After he recovered from the near drowning,he wrote on a stone:"Today my best friend saved my life."
The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him,"After I hurt you,you wrote in the sand and now you write on a stone.Why?"
The other friend replied:"When someone hurts us we should write it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away.But when someone does something good for us,we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase it."
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我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert.During some point of the journey they had an argument,and one friend slapped the other one in the face.The one who got
The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert.During some point of the journey they had an argument,and one friend slapped the other one in the face.
The one who got slapped felt hurt,but without saying anything,wrote in the sand:"Today my best friend slapped me in the face."
They kept on walking until they found an oasis where they decided to take a bath.The one who had been slapped got stuck in the mire and started drowning,but the friend saved him.
After he recovered from the nearly drowning,he wrote on a stone:"Today my best friend saved my life."
The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him,"When I hurt you,you wrote in the sand and now you write on a stone.Why?"
The other friend replied:"When someone hurts us we should write it down in the sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away.But when someone does something good for us,we must engrave it on stone where no wind can ever erase it."

The story is this: the two friends were walking through the desert. During the journey, they had an argument, one friend slapped the other one in the face. The one who got slapped felt hurt, but witho...

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The story is this: the two friends were walking through the desert. During the journey, they had an argument, one friend slapped the other one in the face. The one who got slapped felt hurt, but without saying anything, wrote in the sand: " Today my best friend slapped me in the face. " They went on walking, until they found an oasis, where they decided to take a bath. The one who had been slapped got stuck in the mire, and started drowning, but his friend saved him. After he recovered from the near drowning, he wrote on a stone: " Today my best friend saved my life. " Friend, who had slapped and saved his best friend, asked him, " after I hurt you, you wrote in the sand, and now you write on a stone. Why. He replied: " when someone hurts us, we should write it down in the sand, where the winds of forgiveness can erase it. But when someone does something good for us, we must engrave it in stone, no wind can ever erase it. "


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The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert. During some point of the journey they had an argument, and one friend slapped the other one in the face.
The one who got slapped f...

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The story goes that two friends were walking through the desert. During some point of the journey they had an argument, and one friend slapped the other one in the face.
The one who got slapped felt hurt, but without saying anything, wrote in the sand: "Today my best friend slapped me in the face."
They kept on walking until they found an oasis, where they decided to take a bath. The one who had been slapped got stuck in the mire and started drowning, but the friend saved him.
After he recovered from the near drowning, he wrote on a stone: "Today my best friend saved my life."
The friend who had slapped and saved his best friend asked him, "After I hurt you, you wrote in the sand and now you write on a stone. Why?"
The other friend replied: "When someone hurts us we should write it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away. But when someone does something good for us, we must engrave it in stone where no wind can ever erase it."

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