英文电话对话,DATE:03/17/2011 P:1NAME:CHEN BIN .GUO BIAO Chen,Bin-Lion Feuchtwanger who is a secretary.Guo,Biao-manager who is a manager of City Center Hotel.Guo,Biao:Good morning,This is City Center Hotel.May I help you?Chen,Bin:Good morning,I

英文电话对话,DATE:03/17/2011 P:1NAME:CHEN BIN .GUO BIAO Chen,Bin-Lion Feuchtwanger who is a secretary.Guo,Biao-manager who is a manager of City Center Hotel.Guo,Biao:Good morning,This is City Center Hotel.May I help you?Chen,Bin:Good morning,I
英文电话对话,
DATE:03/17/2011
P:1
NAME:CHEN BIN .GUO BIAO
Chen,Bin-Lion Feuchtwanger who is a secretary.
Guo,Biao-manager who is a manager of City Center Hotel.
Guo,Biao:Good morning,This is City Center Hotel.May I help you?
Chen,Bin:Good morning,I am a secretary to the president of Citadel Electronics .I want to book a conference room for an important meeting of our corporation.
Guo,Biao:What time do you start the meeting?
Chen,Bin:The meeting is held on May 10th ,form 1:00 to 5:00 pm.
Guo,Biao:I am sorry,the room is unavailable on the requested date.
Chen,Bin:What are the available days close to the requested day
Guo,Biao:The available days are May 9th or 11th .
Chen,Bin:I prefer May 9th to 11th.
Guo,Biao:The cost for day will be conference room would cost $130.
Chen,Bin:It’s fine.The conference room also needs a long table with chairs for twelve.
Guo,Biao:Another thing that a deposit of $30 is requested to be sent 2 weeks in advance.
Chen,Bin:I got that,The lost request that meeting room should offer a black board and coffee service.
Guo,Biao:Ok ,May I get that the telephone numbers ,address and the name of the person you are calling please
Chen,Bin:Sure,This is Lion Feuchtwanger.My telephone numbers are 646-220-3755 and my address is 8AV Blooklyn.
Guo,Biao:It’s been nice talking to you if you have no any question let us end the transaction.
Chen,Bin:I know how busy you are ,so I’ll let you go.
Guo,Biao:Let’s keep in touch,Good-bye.
Chen,Bin:bye.
我想根据以上的对话为基础,再修改好点.
请大家帮忙找出对话的错误的地方和需要加强的地方.
我想字数再多些,因此需要高手们得帮忙而且对话的水平要高些（意思就是说不要用一些简单的用词）
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英文电话对话,DATE:03/17/2011 P:1NAME:CHEN BIN .GUO BIAO Chen,Bin-Lion Feuchtwanger who is a secretary.Guo,Biao-manager who is a manager of City Center Hotel.Guo,Biao:Good morning,This is City Center Hotel.May I help you?Chen,Bin:Good morning,I
这样会比较地道 你觉得哪不好我会再修改
Chen,Bin-Lion Feuchtwanger who is a secretary.
Guo,Biao-manager who is a manager of City Center Hotel.
Guo,Biao: Good morning, This is City Center Hotel. May I help you?
Chen,Bin: Good morning, I am of the president of Citadel Electronics . I want to book a conference room for an important meeting for our corporation.
Guo,Biao: Could you tell me what date it is ?（商务会议的话最好不问具体时间,地点）
Chen,Bin: The meeting will be held on May 10th ..
Guo,Biao: I am sorry, rooms unavailable on the May 10th ,but just that day,unfortunately...（减弱语气,希望对方另挑时间）
Chen,Bin: What time should the rooms be available, close to the May 10th?
Guo,Biao:Sir,allow me a few seconds to check(旅店工作千万不能“晾”客人） , We are sure that in May 9th or 11th ,there will be rooms left .（sure...
表示对客户的积极反应）
Chen,Bin: I prefer May 9th and 11th,How much?
Guo,Biao: One room per day is $130.（价钱简洁点好）
Chen,Bin: It’s just fine, a long table with chairs for twelve should be in the conference room . .Anything else I should know?
Guo,Biao: We will do as your said sir,（后边提要求了,最好表现的恭顺一些）and a deposit of $30 is requested to be sent 2 weeks in advance.
Chen,Bin: Got it, Can you offer a black board and coffee service during the meeting?
Guo,Biao: Sure,it is our duty to satisfy our customer (也是上述的作用）,May I take your telephone numbers ,address and you name,sir ?
Chen,Bin: Sure, This is Lion Feuchtwanger. My telephone numbers are 646-220-3755 and my address is 8AV Blooklyn.
Guo,Biao: It’s been nice talking to you,sir ,Anything esle I can do for you?(每句用SIR,表示对对方的重视）
Chen,Bin:Nothing ,thank you,Bye
Guo,Biao: Good-bye.

其实真正美式口语的话用词都是比较简单，要地道且简明扼要，建议你去看些美剧短片中关于预订房间的片段，因为我们不了解你真正的需要，所以不能给你量身定做，还是自己去挖掘比较合适

需要改的地方太多，就直接写了，你对照着看。
Chen,Bin: Good morning, I am a secretary to the president of Citadel Electronics . I want to book a conference room for an important meeting of our corporation.
--> Good...

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需要改的地方太多，就直接写了，你对照着看。
Chen,Bin: Good morning, I am a secretary to the president of Citadel Electronics . I want to book a conference room for an important meeting of our corporation.
--> Good morning, this is the secretary of president of Citadel Electronics . I would like to book a conference room, we will held a corporate meeting. Can you help?
Guo,Biao: What time do you start the meeting?
--> When would you like to book the conference room?
Chen,Bin: The meeting is held on May 10th ,form 1:00 to 5:00 pm.
--> Our meeting is scheduled in May 10th ,from 1:00 to 5:00 pm.
Guo,Biao: I am sorry, the room is unavailable on the requested date.
--> I am sorry, the room is not available on the date.
Chen,Bin: What are the available days close to the requested day ?
--> When is the closest date?
Guo,Biao: The available days are May 9th or 11th .
--> The nearest available dates are May 9th and 11th .
Chen,Bin: I prefer May 9th to 11th.
--> I prefer May 9th.
Guo,Biao: The cost for day will be conference room would cost $130.
--> The conference room is charged at $130 per day.
Chen,Bin: It’s fine. The conference room also needs a long table with chairs for twelve.
--> It's fine. We need a long table with twelve chairs surrounded, may you help arrange it?
Guo,Biao: Another thing that a deposit of $30 is requested to be sent 2 weeks in advance.
--> OK. Please be noted advanced booking requires $30 deposit to be sent us 2 weeks before the date.
Chen,Bin: I got that, The lost request that meeting room should offer a black board and coffee service.
--> Got it. We also need a black board and coffee service.
Guo,Biao: Ok , May I get that the telephone numbers ,address and the name of the person you are calling please ?
--> Ok. Would you please provide me the telephone number ,address and contact person？
Chen,Bin: Sure, This is Lion Feuchtwanger. My telephone numbers are 646-220-3755 and my address is 8AV Blooklyn.
--> Sure, This is Lion Feuchtwanger. My telephone numbers is 646-220-3755 and my address is 8AV Blooklyn.
Guo,Biao: It’s been nice talking to you if you have no any question let us end the transaction.
--> Thank you! What else can I help?
Chen,Bin: I know how busy you are , so I’ll let you go.
--> That's all. Thank you!
Guo,Biao: Let’s keep in touch, Good-bye.
--> Good-bye.
Chen,Bin: bye.

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Guo,Biao: Good morning, This is City Center Hotel. May I help you?
Chen,Bin: Good morning, this is Lion Feuchtwanger and i am calling for Citadel Electronics . I want to book a conference room fo...

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Guo,Biao: Good morning, This is City Center Hotel. May I help you?
Chen,Bin: Good morning, this is Lion Feuchtwanger and i am calling for Citadel Electronics . I want to book a conference room for a meeting.
Guo,Biao: Which date do you have in mind?
Chen,Bin: The meeting will be held on May 10th ,from 1:00 to 5:00 pm.
Guo,Biao: Oh I am sorry. The conference room is not available at that time.
Chen,Bin: What are the available dates around May 10th ?
Guo,Biao: The available dates are either May 9th or 11th .
Chen,Bin: I prefer May 9th over 11th.
Guo,Biao: Great, the daily cost for the conference room is $130.
Chen,Bin: That’s fine. I would need a long table with twelve chairs for the room.
Guo,Biao: Certainly. We will need a deposit of $30 sent to us 2 weeks in advance.
Chen,Bin: I got that. Also the boss requests a black board and coffee service for the meeting.
Guo,Biao: Yes, that can be arranged. May I have the telephone numbers ,address and the name of the contact person please ?
Chen,Bin: Sure, This is Lion Feuchtwanger. My telephone numbers are 646-220-3755 and my address is 8AV Brooklyn.
Guo,Biao: Thank you. do you have any questions?
Chen,Bin: No that's all.
Guo,Biao: If not, we thank you for choosing our hotel and feel free to contact us anytime, Good-bye.
Chen,Bin: bye.

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