帮忙看下下面英语是否为病句 有 请帮忙修改下I have some words to say this year is we study at school last year we wii graduate from the school I hope everyone can be quiet in class Especially in the chinese classyou can sleep lying

帮忙看下下面英语是否为病句 有 请帮忙修改下I have some words to say this year is we study at school last year we wii graduate from the school I hope everyone can be quiet in class Especially in the chinese classyou can sleep lying
帮忙看下下面英语是否为病句 有 请帮忙修改下
I have some words to say
this year is we study at school last year we wii graduate from the school
I hope everyone can be quiet in class Especially in the chinese class
you can sleep lying on the table if you don't want to learn you can't speak in class
I hope everyone can do it thank you very much

帮忙看下下面英语是否为病句 有 请帮忙修改下I have some words to say this year is we study at school last year we wii graduate from the school I hope everyone can be quiet in class Especially in the chinese classyou can sleep lying
I have some words
this is the second year which is also the graduate year we will study at school ,I hope everyone in the class could be quite,especially in the Chinese class.You can sleep on your desk if you are not interested in learning,but you can't make noise!
I hope everyone could respect,thanks

误 this year is we study at school last year
正 this year is the last year we study at school.
误 I hope everyone can be quiet in class
正 I hope everyone to be quiet in class
误 you can sleep lying on the table if you don't want to learn
正 you can sleep on your table if you don't want to learn

I have something to say, last year we studied at school. This year we will graduate from school. I hope everyone can be quiet in class, especially in Chinese class. You can take a nap on the desk if y...

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I have something to say, last year we studied at school. This year we will graduate from school. I hope everyone can be quiet in class, especially in Chinese class. You can take a nap on the desk if you don't want to learn. You should not chat in class while the teacher is teaching, because others are trying to learn. I hope everyone can be considerate of other. Thank you.

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建议你这样改：
I would like to say a few words.
This is our final year at the school; we will be graduating this year.
I hope everyone can be quiet - especially in the Chinese class.
Doze off...

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建议你这样改：
I would like to say a few words.
This is our final year at the school; we will be graduating this year.
I hope everyone can be quiet - especially in the Chinese class.
Doze off at your desk if you don't want to learn, but you can't talk in class.
I hope everyone can respect this. Thank you very much!

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I have somethings to say.We will graduate, so this year is the last year that we study at school.
I hope everyone can be quiet in class,especially in Chinese class.
You can sleep on the table if you don't want to learn, but you can't speak in class.
I hope everyone can do it.Thank you very much.