哪位达人能帮我看看这个回答有没有语法错误?或者有没有什么更地道的说法能表达我的意思?Q：Do you think college life will have great influence on your future and why?A：Yes,of course.Firstly,I can learn something t

哪位达人能帮我看看这个回答有没有语法错误?或者有没有什么更地道的说法能表达我的意思?Q：Do you think college life will have great influence on your future and why?A：Yes,of course.Firstly,I can learn something t
哪位达人能帮我看看这个回答有没有语法错误?或者有没有什么更地道的说法能表达我的意思?
Q：Do you think college life will have great influence on your future and why?
A：Yes,of course.Firstly,I can learn something that I never or psooibly don't have the opportunity to learn.Secondly,I can make friends with many people.Thirdly,college support me a opportunity to learn something that I haven't came into contact before.

哪位达人能帮我看看这个回答有没有语法错误?或者有没有什么更地道的说法能表达我的意思?Q：Do you think college life will have great influence on your future and why?A：Yes,of course.Firstly,I can learn something t
这个回答语法上是没有什么太大的错误,但是这个感觉上觉得英语用的有点生硬,下面的你可以参考一下.
Yes,of course.My college life definitely have great influence on me.First,from the college,I can learn something that is brand-new for me.Maybe also something that I have never heard of.Then,I can make friends with many people who are from different places.Though this way,I can get knowlodge of the different local culture.Last but the most important,in college,I can earn lots of chances to train myself,challenge myself and develop myself !

你的firstly 我完全看不懂 support me 没见过这种用法 用provide 提供比较好 还有come 还是come过去分词 不是came

psooibly->possibly，其他的我水平有限，改不来。。。

你的回答中说了三点。
第一点有语法错误。possibly don't have不通。改为，
First and foremost, I can learn sth that I would otherwise never have the opportunity to learn.
第二句虽然简单，但可以用。
第三句意思上和第一句有点重合，可以适当用简单句描述得生...

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你的回答中说了三点。
第一点有语法错误。possibly don't have不通。改为，
First and foremost, I can learn sth that I would otherwise never have the opportunity to learn.
第二句虽然简单，但可以用。
第三句意思上和第一句有点重合，可以适当用简单句描述得生动些。
Thirdly, college opens a window for my life. It connects the outside world for me.

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