英语作文：关于祝贺朋友生日快乐,帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题,特别是连词方面Dear Mary:I remember that your birthday is May 13 .I congratulated it for you in advance.I am sure all friends and relatives are planning a gra

英语作文：关于祝贺朋友生日快乐,帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题,特别是连词方面Dear Mary:I remember that your birthday is May 13 .I congratulated it for you in advance.I am sure all friends and relatives are planning a gra
英语作文：关于祝贺朋友生日快乐,帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题,特别是连词方面
Dear Mary:
I remember that your birthday is May 13 .I congratulated it for you in advance.
I am sure all friends and relatives are planning a grand birthday party and happy surprise for you.
But I want to express my apologize for asking for a day’s leave on your birthday.Because I’m fully occupied with the work which is assigned in the company.However I spared a little time to prepare a nice gift for you,to compensate for my absence,which will be sent and arrive in your party at that time.I hope you will like it.
Althouht I can’t personally come to pay the compliment for you,I’ll bless and wish you ,having a good health body and being promoted is your company,at heart.
Yours sincerely
LiMing

英语作文：关于祝贺朋友生日快乐,帮忙看看有没有什么语法问题,特别是连词方面Dear Mary:I remember that your birthday is May 13 .I congratulated it for you in advance.I am sure all friends and relatives are planning a gra
Dear Mary:
I remember that your birthday is on May 13 .I wanna to congratulate you in advance.
I am sure all your friends and relatives are planning a grand birthday party and a surprise for you.
But I want to express my apologize for asking for a day’s leave on your birthday. Because I’m fully occupied with the work assigned by my company. However, I spared a little time to prepare a nice gift for you to compensate for my absence, which will be sent and arrive in your party at that time.I hope you will like it.
Althouht I can’t personally come to pay the compliment for you, I’ll bless and wish you be healthy and being promoted in your company.
Yours sincerely
LiMing

我英语不及格。。

第一行，
13th。第二句最好改为May you happy birthday in advance。不然前后时态不一致。
个人认为全篇有些chingish，最好大改。
建议，让老师给你修改，这样你能明白错误错在哪。

I congratulated it for you in advance应该改为I congratulate to you on your birthday in advance.
But I want to express my apologize应该改为But I want to express my apology
pay the compliment for you应该改为pay you for the compliment