求英语演讲达人面试达人修改面试自我介绍本人有200词英文自我介绍,面试用（本科入学）,请帮忙润色,使语言更流畅,以及修改用词语法不当之处.My name is *** and I’m from ****. It’s a great pleasure

求英语演讲达人面试达人修改面试自我介绍本人有200词英文自我介绍,面试用（本科入学）,请帮忙润色,使语言更流畅,以及修改用词语法不当之处.My name is *** and I’m from ****. It’s a great pleasure
求英语演讲达人面试达人修改面试自我介绍
本人有200词英文自我介绍,面试用（本科入学）,请帮忙润色,使语言更流畅,以及修改用词语法不当之处.
My name is *** and I’m from ****. It’s a great pleasure of me to have the opportunity to take this interview and have a brief introduction of myself.
My interest in high school most lies in science. In my leisure time , I often read some articles in the Chinese version of the magazine scientific America , or watch the lectures of TED. Although I couldn’t understand them in every detail , however , the most advanced ideas and technology brought about by the development of science which have something in common with the thoughts that once flashed across my mind do thrilled me and motivated my interest a lot .
Among all the subjects , I love physics most ,for it traces the essence of natural law , which is also the deep motivation for my choice of science major . In order to improve my calculating skills in physics , I learned advanced mathematics completely on my own in the summer vacation .
Besides what has been stated above , I also love graphic design , for it involves the following steps. Grasp basic principles and skills , process my thoughts and originality with mastered skills and finally comes out the work of my own. This process of creating fills me with a sense of achievement .( I used to design posters for my class in some school activities and in this summer vacation , I’m going to learn some programming languages of webpage and I’m looking forward to designing the webpage of my own .)
That’s all . Thanks for your listening .

求英语演讲达人面试达人修改面试自我介绍本人有200词英文自我介绍,面试用（本科入学）,请帮忙润色,使语言更流畅,以及修改用词语法不当之处.My name is *** and I’m from ****. It’s a great pleasure
首先最重要的是要向面试考官打招呼,礼貌.
Good morning/afternoon,distinguished ladies and gentlemen,(到时候要注意下考官性别啊）
It’s my great honor to have the opportunity of introducing myself in this interview. My name is *** and I’m from ****.
My interest in high school mostly lies in science. In my leisure time , I often read some articles in the Chinese version of America Scentific magazine , or watch the video lectures of TED. Although I couldn’t understand them in every detail ,I grasped the most advanced ideas and technologies brought about by them. And I felt much motivated and thrilled by those existing scientific technologies which have something in common with the thoughts that once crossed my mind. .
Among all the subjects , I love physics most ,for it traces the essence of natural laws , which is also the deep motivation for my choice as a science major . In order to improve my calculating skills in physics , I learned advanced mathematics completely on my own in the summer vacation .
Besides what has been stated above , I also love graphic design , for it involves the following steps. Grasp basic principles and skills , process my thoughts and originality with mastered skills and finally obatain the results of my own. This process of creating fills me with a sense of achievement .( I have the experience of designing posters for my class in some school activities and in this summer vacation , I’m going to learn some programming languages of webpage and I’m looking forward to designing my personal homepage.)