小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me forsix years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You t

小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me forsix years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You t
小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?
Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.
Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me for
six years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You told me,”don’t
be proud!” when I succeeded.
Goodbye,dear classmates,thank you for being with me
for six years.Thank you for bringing me joy and happiness.Which made me became
lively and cheerful.
Goodbye,dear playground,you recorded my
passions.Goodbye,dear flowers and trees,you brought me a good mood everyday
and a good learning environment.
Goodbye,primary school.I am leaving you,but you willalways stay in my heart.

小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me forsix years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You t
I （willmiss） you forever.
我（）你到永远. 中间这个willmiss用得不好,应该换成了love,我爱你到永远.
Goodbye, dear teachers, thank you for teaching me （forsix） years.
再见,亲爱的老师,谢谢你教我（）年, 这里的forsix是什么意思啊,应该是six.
You told me,”don’（tbe） proud!
你告诉我,“不要'（）骄傲! 这里的tbe去掉.
” when I succeeded.
“当我成功. 与下一句
Goodbye,dear classmates,thank you for being with （mefor） six years.
再见,亲爱的同学,谢谢你和（这里mefor去掉）六年. 连接不通.应再加一句：我就会想起你（I will think of you）
Which made me becamelively and cheerful.
这使我（becamelively）和愉悦. 这句去掉,而且单词错了.
Goodbye,dear flowers and trees, you brought me a good mood （everydayand换成and） a good learning environment.
再见,亲爱的花与树,你给我一个好心情（everydayand）一个良好的学习环境.

I am leaving you,but you （willalways去掉!） stay in my heart.
我离开你,但你留在我的心中.
（求最佳答案!）