修改一段英文i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. the most of my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square m

修改一段英文i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. the most of my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square m
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i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. the most of my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square meters and has more than 90 buildings. i like those buildings very much, for they looks so magnificant. the dessert there i like very much,too. they are so tasteful. although the trip made me very tired, i enjoyed it as well as happy and delight.do you like my trip? and don't you think it was wonderful? can you talk about your experience of the travel?

修改一段英文i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. the most of my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square m
i will share with you a wonderful travel. i went to Shenyang last year. the weather was good and filled with fresh air. my favorite place was Jin Palace there. it was set up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square meters and has more than 90 buildings. i like those buildings very much, for they looks so magnificant. i like the dessert there very much,too. they are so tasteful. although the trip made me very tired, i enjoyed it as well as happy and delight.do you like my trip? and don't you think it was wonderful? can you talk about your experience of the travel?

I have a piece of wonderful trip experience to share with you. I went to Shenyang last year. The weather was good there and the air was freshing too. I liked Jin Palace most ,which was built up in 162...

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I have a piece of wonderful trip experience to share with you. I went to Shenyang last year. The weather was good there and the air was freshing too. I liked Jin Palace most ,which was built up in 1625 and covers the area of 60,000 square meters and has more than 90 buildings.I liked those buildings very much, for they looked so magnificant. Further more,I also liked the dessert there which is so tasteful. Although the trip made me very tired, i enjoyed it as well with happiness and delight.Do you like my trip? It was wonderful,wasn't it? Will you tell me something about your experience of travelling ?

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I will share with you a wonderful trip. I went to Shenyang last year. The weather was good and the air was fresh. My most favorite place was the Jin Palace there,which was set up in 1625 and covers an...

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I will share with you a wonderful trip. I went to Shenyang last year. The weather was good and the air was fresh. My most favorite place was the Jin Palace there,which was set up in 1625 and covers an area of 60,000 square meters and has more than 90 buildings. I like those buildings very much, because they looked so magnificant. I like the local desserts very much,too,because they were so tasty. Although the trip made me very tired, I enjoyed it very much.Do you like my trip? Don't you think it wonderful? Can you tell me something about your experience of travelling?
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There are lots of things to do in sunshine town we want to tell you about in this new town.
Would you like to …
Live in a modern town?
Sunshine town is a new town in Beijing, the capita...

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There are lots of things to do in sunshine town we want to tell you about in this new town.
Would you like to …
Live in a modern town?
Sunshine town is a new town in Beijing, the capital of china. It is only 40 minutes from the centre of Beijing by underground. There is less air pollution in sunshine town than in other areas of Beijing. There is a country park. The park is beautiful. Its name is Sunshine Park. You can go walking there. You can see Green hills, trees and lakes too.
Live in flats?
There are many tall buildings here. They usually have 18 to 35 floors. Look at this tall building. Most of us live in buildings like this. We like to live in tall buildings because we can be close to our friends. For example, Millie and Simon live in the same building. Millie’s home is on the ninth floor and Simon’s home is on the eleventh floor. They do not have to go far if they need help with their homework!
Go shopping?
Hey, this is great. There are lots of good shops in sunshine Town. You can shop until ten o’clock at night in most shopping malls. Star shopping Mall is our favorite shopping malls. Star mall. You can find lots of souvenirs here. Most souvenirs are not expensive. You pay a little money and they are yours.
Eat Chinese food?
Lf so, you are here in the right place! How many restaurants are there in sunshine town? Lt is hard to say. You can choose any food you like in sunshine town. You can try Beijing Duck in one of the Chinese restaurants in star shopping Mall. How much Beijing Duck can you eat? If you don’t like Chinese food, there are lots of Western restaurants too!
Enjoy Beijing opera!
Why don’t you visit our local theatre with us? You can enjoy Beijing opera here. Can you sing Beijing opera? No? Well. Never mind. We can teach you.

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