英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
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英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
英语大神进.这是我写的一篇作文,有许多错误的地方,望指出并改正!
你想要几年级的水平?是就把你句子里的语法问题改了还是意思也给你稍微顺一下?
Dear Sally,
i'm so glad to hear that you are planning a trip to Beijing.
being a local people,i'd like like to tell you something about this city.
Beijing is a city with very long history.To make it simple,there were many Emperors living in the old time.(北京是城市 不是人或者动物什么的 所以不要用HAVE 要用 there be,时态上用普通过去式就行了,反正这些皇帝都死了 也不会对现在有什么延续 用不到完成式）
Besides the history,there are also a lots of intresting place to go,such as forbiden city,Yuanmingyuan imperial garden,or Great wall.Beijing is a wonderful city you can't miss if you plan to come China.And the most important thing is that you can have various delicious food here beyond your imagination.
I promise Beijing won't let you down,and can't wait to see you in Beijing!
yours,
your name
beside 换成besides
place 加s
省略号换成and so on
the important is把冒号去了，加个that，delicious,美味的
最后一句话不好，换一个
总体感觉太汉语式了。。。
语法错误：曾有许多皇帝......Many emperors used to live here. beside用法错误 As an old city, Beijing has a lot of(或者用lots of 但不能用 a lots of)places of interest(而不是interesting) such as the Pal...
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语法错误：曾有许多皇帝......Many emperors used to live here. beside用法错误 As an old city, Beijing has a lot of(或者用lots of 但不能用 a lots of)places of interest(而不是interesting) such as the Palace Museum(故宫)，Summer Palace(圆明园) which used to be glorious (曾经很辉煌) What is most important,最重要的是，原文语法错误 美食 delicious food 让你失望 let you down
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曾经有很多皇帝住 应该这么来 there are lot's of emperors lived in here during the last time