大家帮我检查下这篇文章的语法..错的给我改下..here's a gay starin my school.from the first moment He came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People saw him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway.

大家帮我检查下这篇文章的语法..错的给我改下..here's a gay starin my school.from the first moment He came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People saw him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway.
大家帮我检查下这篇文章的语法..错的给我改下..
here's a gay starin my school.from the first moment He came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People saw him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway...dramaes of him are everywhere...do you wanna know who he is...do you wanna know who he is...He is mr.extra the coquettish material guy this just in...they always got news of my personal things in the net...so he's to sneak away to the Singapura..But surroundings still joked him...do you wanna konw who he is...do you?..He fell in love with a boy,yeah,a same sex guy..what's wrong?...but everytime he makes his lover angry cause of his crazy behaviors...people hate him at most..said that he's a bitch,a erotic prostitute,a whore...pherhaps from the beginning they thought this love must be a joke..do you wanna know who he is..don't think he is innocent...actually,he's me...sweetie's shameless...you told me you love me...oh bullshit..are you kidding me...nomatter how do you think of me.I never mind...but i often cry in the cornor stealthily...in fact..i am a cinderella...alright...don't hurt him anymore..please...thanks..
还有说下中文意思
在我们的学校这里有一个曾经快乐的人,从他来到这个学校那时,整个学校开始尖叫..而且从未停止...人们用异样的眼神看他...从各个渠道打听他的消息..他的八卦新闻遍地都是..你想知道他是谁吗...他是额外的人..妖艳的拜金女就是拉...人们常把他的私人事情发到网上..所以他不得不逃去SINGAPORE..但他周围的人依然嘲笑他...你想知道他是谁吗..他后来爱上了一个男孩..是的一个同性的人..可那有什么错吗...可是每次因为他的疯狂行为..使他的爱人生气..人们更讨厌他了..说他是XXXXXXXX...大约从一开始这段感情就被人们当成一个笑话...你想知道他是谁吗.你不认为他很无辜吗..事实上他就是我...叫SWEETIE的贱人..你说你爱上我了..胡说.你一定在整我..不管他人怎么看我...我从未介意..但我常偷偷的在角落里哭泣..说实在的..我是一个可怜的人....不要再伤害我了...求你了...
这是我改编的PIECE OF ME..给朋友的..可惜我英文能力有限..如果错的多..就帮我翻译一下..但意思要全..把翻译的大出来..如果弄的好我还要加分的...

大家帮我检查下这篇文章的语法..错的给我改下..here's a gay starin my school.from the first moment He came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People saw him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway.
文章写得不错,直接改过了,没有具体列出.
Here's a gay studying in my school.the moment he came to the school,the whole school started screaming and never stopped...People looked at him in strange eyes...and got his news anyway...dramas of him are everywhere...do you wanna know who he is...do you wanna know who he is...He is Mr.Extra ,the coquettish material guy .That's just him...they always got news of his personal affairs on the net...so he's to sneak away to Singapora..But people around still joked about him...do you wanna konw who he is...do you?..He fell in love with a boy,yeah,the same sex guy..what's wrong?...but everytime he makes his lover angry out of his crazy behaviors...people hate him even more.saying that he's a bitch,an erotic prostitute,a whore...pherhaps from the beginning they thought this love must be a joke..do you wanna know who he is..don't you think he is innocent...actually,he's me...sweetie's shameless...you told me you love me...oh bullshit..are you kidding me...no matter how do you think of me.I will never mind...but I often cry in the cornor secretly...in fact..I am a cinderella...alright...don't hurt him anymore..please...thanks..