帮我检查以下初3英语作文有什么语法上的错误.Dear Dad and MumHow's it going I hope you 're in good health.I have been Ningxia University for a long time.There are lots of interesting things around me every day.Now ,let me tell you so

帮我检查以下初3英语作文有什么语法上的错误.Dear Dad and MumHow's it going I hope you 're in good health.I have been Ningxia University for a long time.There are lots of interesting things around me every day.Now ,let me tell you so
帮我检查以下初3英语作文有什么语法上的错误.
Dear Dad and Mum
How's it going I hope you 're in good health.I have been Ningxia University for a long time.There are lots of interesting things around me every day.Now ,let me tell you something about that.
At Ningxia University,I got along well with lots of Chinese students ,and we learned from each other.I also introduced many good ways to learn English for my chinese classmates and I often help them practice their English spoken.Last month,I visited Sha Lake and Helan Mountain,and I ate many delicious food ,I enjoyed myself there.
I have been in Ningxia for five months.I made friends with a lot of Chinese people.I enjoy living here.I hope I can learn more Chinese and visit more interesing places here.
Be wishes to you .
Yous
David.

帮我检查以下初3英语作文有什么语法上的错误.Dear Dad and MumHow's it going I hope you 're in good health.I have been Ningxia University for a long time.There are lots of interesting things around me every day.Now ,let me tell you so
1.How's everything going?
2.I have been in Ningxia University for a long time.
3.My life is full of interesting things every day.
4.And now,let me tell you some.
5.In Ningxia University,I got along well with most of Chinese students ,and we learned from each other.
6.I introduced many good ways to learn English to my chinese classmates and helped them practice their English speaking.
7.Last month,I visited Sha Lake,Helan Mountain and ate many delicious food,I really enjoyed myself there.
8.I enjoyed living here.
9.Best wishes to you.
10.结尾处的格式应该是
Yours,
David

Dear Dad and Mum
How's everything going? I hope you're in good health. I have been in Ningxia University for a long time. There are lots of interesting things around me every day. Now, let m...

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Dear Dad and Mum
How's everything going? I hope you're in good health. I have been in Ningxia University for a long time. There are lots of interesting things around me every day. Now, let me tell you something about them.
In Ningxia University, I get along well with lots of Chinese students, and we learn from each other. I also introduce many good ways to learn English to my Chinese classmates and I often help them practice their spoken English. Last month, I visited Sha Lake and Helan Mountain，where I ate many delicious food and I enjoyed myself so much.
I have been in Ningxia for five months. I have made a lot of Chinese friends here and they are pretty friendly to me. I enjoy living here. I hope I can learn more Chinese and visit more interesing places here.
Be wishes to you .
Yous'
David.

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How's it going ? I hope you 're in good health.
I have been Ningxia University for a long time. (Ningxia University 前应加介词 in 或 at，at...表示“在...就学/工作”)
There are lots of interesting things aro...

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How's it going ? I hope you 're in good health.
I have been Ningxia University for a long time. (Ningxia University 前应加介词 in 或 at，at...表示“在...就学/工作”)
There are lots of interesting things around me every day. Now , let me tell you something about that.
At Ningxia University, I got along well with lots of Chinese students , （上文中已经提到 I have been ...，说明是迄今为止，所以此处的 get along with 也应该表示到现在为止一直在进行，改为 have been getting along with ...,表示从过去到现在而且还有继续进行下去）
and we (改为 have been learning) from each other. （以下可以转为一般现在时）I also （从修辞角度看，also 改为 often更妥）introduced （改为一般性在时 introduce）many good ways to learn English for my chinese classmates （introduce sth. to sb. 或introduce sb. sth. 这是双宾语。而不是 introduce sth. for sb.）and I often help them practice their English spoken. Last month, I visited Sha Lake and Helan Mountain，and I ate many delicious food, I enjoyed myself there.
I have been in Ningxia for five months. I made friends with a lot of Chinese people. I enjoy living here. I hope I can learn more Chinese and visit more interesing places here.
Be wishes to you .（没见过这种祝愿句，表示愿望应该是 be + 形容词，是否改为 be wishful to you,直译“对你满怀希望”，意译“祝您前程无量”）

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